And spell Daphne as Daphne, not Daphnee

It’s... unrealistic. Don’t get me wrong the concept would’ve been great. But you weren’t able to pull it off.

Your english is pretty bad

So far I dragged myself through the chapters till this one. Eleven years old acting like "adults" constantly is really too much. And it's so unbelievable dry. I'm out of here.

i thought it was chris black? why did it become mark black?

It looks like English is your second language. Well done for writing in a language that's not your native one! That's not an easy job.
There are of course a number of grammatical and spelling errors throughout your work that could use the attention of a native English speaking beta to tidy them up. If possible, I recommend you find someone who can help you with this. I'd also recommend you put a little note at the start of your fic to let people know that English isn't your native language - this will encourage your reviewers and readers to be more patient with errors.
Best wishes!

This story needs a beta for grammar and content, it's somewhat interesting and has a lot of potential
but the grammar is bad and the writer seems to miss his target sometimes.
For example in this chapter I imagine he intended for Harrys transfiguration lesson to set him up as a
prodigy, but it reads like an arrogant "cheater" that had tutors for years instead of a talented young prodigy in his first lesson.

Great story keep it up

dreadfully needs a beta!

THis is a horrible introduction,

Cant wait for the next one

This is a great story
"BUT" Get a Beta your pidgin English is destroying it.
I spend more time trying to decipher what your trying to say and loose all enjoyment in reading it!

Please for all that is HOLY get a BETA! (English speaking / writing Beta)

Great update.

Dueling this will be interesting

A good chapter, I hope soon the next chapter of this beautiful story UwUr every chapter we get caught ! Greetings and take care!