| Reviews for Return of Nancy Bobofit |
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XxMatixX chapter 2 . 2/23 Same... I have ADHD and I can never write more than 3 chapters because then I just get bored and find another thing that interests me... it’s really annoying... but I really liked your story! |
Ahrva chapter 2 . 12/23/2019 NANCY AND GROVER RUN INTO EACH OTHER! |
kitten148 chapter 1 . 12/9/2018 I think your portrayal of Percy and Anabeth was off, but you got Nancy just right. This was a fun story and your writing was pretty good (maybe work a little on punctuation). |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2018 where's the rest of the stoey |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2018 Your summary was not that bad |
Jason Senan chapter 2 . 7/20/2017 This was cool thanks. |
Captin jar chapter 2 . 7/11/2017 you should do a few scenarios where she gets suspicious of Percy and follows him home and see's all of his friends (plz include grover and the stols and characters like them plz) and maybe one where she is at work at a Mc Donald and Percy and Nico are ordering food. |
MKDemigodZ chapter 1 . 6/28/2017 Okay, just saw the summary and you said BOO. Oops. |
GoldenFlower chapter 2 . 6/28/2017 Idea for Nancy (if you like it..) (I also have ADHD and Dyslexia lol ) anyway as I was saying, you have already established that Nancy is having trouble with love, is a bit jealous and definitely does not like Annabeth; so what if Nancy starts bullying Annabeth to take out her anger for her own problems, and Percy try's to be nice but all his friends (the 7 plus some) try to defend them. If could be a dramatic comedy? (Just an idea no worries if you don't like it, I like the way you write by the way , forgot to mention that earlier hehe) . |
MKDemigodZ-Warrior chapter 1 . 6/28/2017 Hm...very interesting. So, when does this story take place BTW? Like after the events of the Percy Jackson Books, but before the Heroes of Olympus Books, or after the Heroes of Olympus Books, but before the Trials of Apollo books, or like during the Trials of Apollo books since Percy and Annabeth aren't really in that series? |
Solei Dragheart chapter 2 . 6/28/2017 If I remember correctly, then there was this guy named Matt or something that made fun of Tyson and Percy would stand up for him. You do a Chapter about. Just an idea but you could say he la actually a demigod and Thinks he could fight Percy. And then Percy just beats the snot out of him. Just saying though. |
luvwrestlinfangurl chapter 1 . 5/14/2017 This was really great E. |
AWESome chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 Awesome |
A.Loser.that.likes.anime chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 that was awesome can't wait to read more! |
Bookworm1212 chapter 1 . 3/29/2017 Please write more like Nancy finds out who he really is |