wait it this one the same as the other chapter mut instead of the name Emilie its cathrine?

helooo

Her name is emilie btw not Catherine

I’m in chapter 4 right now and I just want to say that I could imagine Gabriel’s plans falling apart cuz he didn’t have his ears perirced or something

Dont delete this!
Yes, you're grammar can use some work, but that doesnt make the concept bad! The plot is acctualy rather great!
It's like miraculous! The characters are poorly written(mari's classroom is just a bunch of steriotypes given human form and name), Chloe is WAAAAY too steriotypical!(she doesnt seem to have any good reason(adrien is a main character, give us a good reason for chloe to act like she does!)) And marrinettes crush is so UNREALISTIC, SHALLOW AS HELL, and REALY REALY DUMB! But the ideas, are great! Sorry I just rantes to you about the show...
And by all means, make a sequel! As they say:
'You do you!'. Keep up the good work!
-ShAllow

I just clicked on this out of curiosity and it has really good ideas and great bones. I did find some grammer issues and some parts seemed like you had some problems with writing it. All in all, it was a very entertaining read and that's the point of all this. To have fun writing about your favorate things and sharing them with likeminded friends. A rewrite would be amazing with improvements and edits. You are doing great and I highly suggest that you continue writing. If you want a bata reader or a cowriter, I'm more than happy to provide any service or advice you want. Keep going. Oh, one thing from one novice to another, never let a lack of views or few reviews get you down. Most people don't look past page one.

Please continue I have enjoyed it and I like it because it tells a story with feeling and presents "real-life" problems and ladybug is a friend to chat/adrein and comfurts him when he needs it...so...PLEASE CONTINUE...

I liked this story because I think that you did a very good job of describing emotions. The chapters were short, but they still explained the story. I wish that you would consider writing a sequel to this, but I understand if you don't want to. The story is far from terrible though.

This was a good chapter despite the sadness.

Good story. I don't think Hawkmoth would turn that evil to try and kill Ladybug...but whatever. I really loved how you mentioned that Hawkmoth used to be a good guy. I hate it when people say he's been a villain all though history even though he wasn't. I just don't understand what people don't get about that. I'm glad you did. I also loved Marinette's ramblings of despair, especially the meatball one.

Poor Adrien. I wish that she had showed him who she was.

he just lost his father and killed his mother how the fuck is it okay for her not to reveal her identity!? D: how! I don't understand! cause she not ready!? she can cheer like its no big deal after he begged her to stay with him for comfort and support after finding out his dad is evil and his killed his mom! she can cheer that her crush has been in love with her the whole time and that its bad that she knows his identity when she didn't really want to know in the first place?! No! thats not okay! she just kissed him and ran! I get that he's in love with her but he doesn't need a kiss! he needs her being there for him! She didn't even tell him any comforting words or a 'I love you'! she just kissed him as a distraction and ran so he wouldn't question or cry about knowing her identity in front of her. they no longer have any villians! there is no point in keeping it secret! if your going to fluffy shenanigans you don't mix it with a tone shift of parental murder! ggggaaaahhhhh I got so invest by your brilliant writing skills but that just pisses me off. wouldn't gabe at least try to trade his life for Adrien's mom or something as redemption in some sort of way? I mean seriously!

They need to go take his Miraculous and also keep Paris from falling apart. I wonder if Catherine knows that Chat Noir is Adrien.

Dang. I don't think that Adrien's mom will be too happy with what Gabriel has done. I wonder how this will play out.

I'd like to see how that ends.