| Reviews for Black Magic |
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   stareyedplanet chapter 3 . 7/17 ... i literally squealed when they had to kiss, even if i totally saw it coming! but more on that later. i love the detail of the parents coming to watch the quidditch match. i never much thought of that being a thing so it was a really nice detail. fleamont and his wife (for the life of me i can’t remember her name) are literally so cute. hogwarts sweethearts? do i detect that from kimmie and sirius? mayhaps? ok but seriously; does sirius have a crush on kimmie and james knows about it or something? cause that would explain why he takes sirius’ side. and little remmy blushing? does everyone just like miss kimmie over here? and thE KISS! I swear to god sirius must like her because that kiss was... whoo... i just love literally everything about this! keep up the good work. kudos! :) |
| stareyedplanet chapter 2 . 7/17 oooh yessss! i am still absolutely adoring this dynamic between sirius and kimmie! as well as the brother sister relationship with james. her using his middle name to shut him up was priceless! i would like to know what regulus is planning though.. hmmmmm, what could it possibly be? i’m excited for more on that later! this was great! kudos! :) |
| stareyedplanet chapter 1 . 7/15 OOH! i already am invested with this (like all your other works). i know a potter sibling of some capacity is a often used trope but i can already tell you’re doing it differently which is a very nice change of pace. once again i feel like it is clear you understand what and who you are writing which is so important to get readers invested! i love that she is kinda in james’ shadow because i feel like that can give her a real goal or something to be her own person and more of a drive to show her worth! i’m excited to read the next part! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/17 that was fecking awful like the rest of your writing |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/17 boring boring boring |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/17 your story allready sucked and it is worse |
| beaniebun chapter 3 . 3/25/2019 Nooo why stop right there |
| beaniebun chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 oh my the thing about the slide is so funny and petty! |
| Xoxo chapter 3 . 3/13/2019 Kimmie says "hate" but I read "sexual tension and jealousy" ;D also awww I feel bad now, does Remus have an unreciprocated crush there?! |
| Love.Fiction.2020 chapter 3 . 3/14/2019 Nice chap |
| 10868letsgo chapter 3 . 3/11/2019 Add more. Wonder if James felt bad about it? |
| Bluebell Winter chapter 3 . 3/8/2019 Is it sad to say that I wanted Lily to see go up to check on Kimmie and then hex Sirius for making her cry? I feel like it would've been a sweet friendship moment. |
| Sparky She-Demon chapter 3 . 3/8/2019 I love this story and especially this chapter! I had a feeling that they'd wind up kissing! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2019 #kimmie is perfect to put james in his place |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2019 #kimberly and sirius have some issues |
