I loved watching this story grow from the original one shot and seeing just how you developed all the characters and their relationships. I loved this ending and how Thawne ended up going to jail though I can't help but hate Darhk and hope he gets put away too, or whatever happens to him. And I like how the ending we went Barry working with Len and staying with him. It gives them time to work on their relationship and decide exactly what they want and to build that trust again. Thanx so much for the story! Bye!

I like this story a lot.
Very nice old detective movie vibe.
I'll admit it has been a while since I read something this dynamic with the 50's.
I look forward to reading more of your work.

Oh, this just got better.

Oh my gosh, I'm so glad you decided to continue this! I love how this has played out and how Barry is trying to get Thawne for killing his mom and gettting his dad in prison, which ended up killing him. I can only hope that things end well and that both Barry and Len make it out of this. I really hope that the police believe Barry though so that the both of them don't end up in jail at the end of it. I love the way Len is already so charmed by Barry and wants to believe in him and how Barry trusts him so much too. I can't wait to see what happens next with Thawne and how things play out! Thanx so much, bye!

EVERYTHING IS SO TENSE OMFG

Omg you brought alexa back! EEEEKKKEE

Oh my goodness when I got the email for this I was ecstatic because I LOVE YOUR WRITING

Please make this a full story. It would be soooo gooad

I need to know now what brought Barry to Snart's forested and what he needs him for! This seems so interesting already and I'm excited to see if you continue it. Thanx so much! Bye!

I love noir! You really captured it well; please, write more.

TBC!

Ooo...idk where this is going, but I am now really interested in finding out :)

Hey sweetie lovely story by the way;i would really appreciate it if you could message me on my personal email;)