oh my goodness, that's great!

Awww, very nice! Very fitting to how the dwarves came to first accept and then to depend on Bilbo, and shows their (to us) gruff affection and loyalty very well. Thanks for sharing this! :)

Feels like it just stopped, the poem. Is that all? I feel like this can be a crossover, since you have the Hobbit and LOTR in this poem collection. Nonetheless, good work! I like it! :)

this is great! i love all of these

this is hilarious! I am dying rn

-meep-

FOR GONDOR! *runs charging into the distance*

the best moments. all I can say

Leggs and Gim Forever!

Interesting take on the hobbits. You're back and so am i! Well done. I love Frodo's part. :)

Love this!

I LOVE the literary devices used! The rhythm is nearly perfect. Great work!

Is there one last verse because I see a space where there would be? Just curious is all. Otherwise, this is a very well-written poem, written the Tolkien style for poetry. Well done. :)

Oh, poor Sam! It's a shame what happens when Sam and Frodo reach the Grey Havens :( But this is not that poem. :) I thought you did well showing Sam's struggles on his journey with Frodo to Mount Doom. The way he doesn't give up and the way he preservers through thick and thin to see the quest through to the end shows well in this poem.

Well done. :)

So good I love it!