The balance between the angst and sweetness is just perfect. i way you write has a flow to it, and sounds rather poetic. i loved the expressions. i loved them all.

*hands her a much deserved piece of fudge* Beautiful! I love Ken x Ran, and you do it so well. _

O.O Wow! That's nicely written and nicely brought out. I love the way how some of the scenes are described and the feelings too. I don't know what to say anymore, but just... Nice work!

i don't really listen to much music besides jrock or jpop, but... i'm tempted to listen to this one-your fic is really pretty (meaning well written!)

m, nice. _ sweetness and angst in varied proportions that taste just wonderful. nicely in-char, mostly... and a few good bits that actually made me laugh out loud... Omi looking 'petrified' at Aya's sudden ability to reciprocate a simple greeting vocally, and:

What have you turned me into? I dare say you made me… fluffy.

Fluffy.

Urgh.

...priceless. XD! i salute you. _

hey its' sweet! so touchy & sappy just how i like it -

write more of it ne? :)

Wow that was well written and . I think you've really managed to capture the essence of what a relationship between the two would be like. I commend you.

.I'm speechless, honestly. Aya-kun *would* think that way wouldn't he? That was some amazing writing. You're no reader, you're a definite writer. more! A job well done!

- Wai