SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! YOU HAVEN'T POSTED IN TWO YEARS! TWO! SOME LF US WERE GROWING ATTACHED TO THIS STORY YOU MEANIE!

Poor Ed. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you update soon :D

Not bad but you might want to proof read, fix some grammar errors and missing words. Think about using a beta, I will volunteer, I use betas as well, everyone does.