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i love these stories so far!

i didnt know you had other stories on i like this sequel i was hoping to see the end... and i was hoping raichu would come back or at least let ash train a pichu... well like you say you win some you lose some. keep up the good work.

I luv the way u do ur battle scenes so update soon l8ta

Loved your stories. Just finished with the first chapter to your Ash and Nessa part. Hope to see the next chapter up soon. Take care.