No matter how many times I read this, I get sucked into the story each time. I love the way you describe things and paint Loki's magical world and being into colorful analogy and metaphor. And the amount of thought and planning throughout the whole fic is frankly amazing. I enjoyed watching Tony- engineering genius billionaire playboy that he is- be completely taken with the magical conundrum that is Loki, and enjoy every second of it. Journey into Mystery indeed! I also appreciate that your Tony wasn't all just science jargon and that he COULDN'T simply take Loki apart to analyze and solve like an equation, though he tried.

You kept the magic without letting it fall into "science we just don't understand yet" and there wasn't suddenly a burst of insight and the invention of a mechanical device that blocked "magic" or other abilities. Although I have read other fics with that plot device and enjoyed quite a few of them, I much more like the idea that Loki is such a creature of mystic means that he CAN'T be cut off from his power completely.

So thank you for this wonderful story you've created, I love it to bits!

Awesome

Jaws themesong for the end of this chapter

Thanks... instant circus ear leech. Awesome story so far though

I have a song it might already be down but LA devotee by Panic! at the Disco. It's mostly just because of the name but the line 'I wouldn't change ya, oh-oh wouldn't ever try to make you leave, no-o' somehow mad me think of this story.

Holy effin moley! It was a hell of a ride indeed. And I was hooked from the first chapter on. I love your style of writing and the characters you so thoughtfully described and let "evolve" and then there was magic in more than one way. Awesome. Tbh., I came for the smut (well... there wasn't really any) and stayed for the story.
Thank you for this amazing story and I hope to read more of you in the future. :)

Oh my god, here goes! *reads the first sentence with her head half turned away*

Okay, Tony, but IS THERE A WAY TO SAY IT SO IT DOESN'T SOUND CRAZY?!
Oh, Rhodey said the exact same thing, damn…

Aw, Rhodey's such a good friend tho!

Yes yes yes, Tony! You WERE made for each other!

MaAAAHHAHHH! I love everything sO MUCH!

'no one told me the Cheshire Cat would be hot' anjflibaehlbfhjl! I'm dying and I'm (almost) crying!?

I wish I could turn invisible whenever I felt like it…

Njksbfhjbhj! I know it's not goodbye forever, though, but it still kinda hurts…! MAahfbhk! Tony's feels are now my feels and njvkdnjk…

HE'S BACK! OMG, THAT WAY TO SHOW HIMSELF! GIVING HIM CHOCOLATE, AND TONY NOT EVEN REALIZING BEFORE HE ATE IT, MY GOD!

NJkcbhsakl! I LOVE Loki's evil grin…!

*gasp* It's gone! (well, of course… he doesn't have to hide anymore…but stiiillll)

I love them just talking to each other… It's so carefree and… I just love their free conversations, the teasing and all… Yeah, I love it!

Chocolate! They don't have chocolate?! What a horrible world to live in! A world without chocolate is a nightmare!
Wait. Weekends?! Is that the 'one more thing'? In that case, you were right! I did laugh! Like…WEEKENDS?! My gOD, Loki!
I AM SOOOO SOOO SOOOOOO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!? HE IS COMING HOME SOMETIMES TO VISIT TONY AND MY GOD MY GOD MY GOD! ISN'T THAT THE CUTEST THING YOU'VE EVER HEARD OF?!

of cOURSE he really likes you! *hugs the shit out of herself because she can't hug them*

I love that Loki just popped up out of nowhere, hahah! (I love this tory so much, I can't even-)
He is so clever! I love it! He knows and does and schemes and…! He is so…najfnehwlj!

Yes Loki! You tell him!
Ah, I love his sass! And his sarcasm! I love him!

Wait. The door to Tony's house or the door to Loki's secret room? Is it Loki's room?! (Otherwise Tony could just unlock the door, right?)
IT IS! THIS MAKES ME INCREDIBLY HAPPY!
Of course he's right the first time, I bet his subconscious remembered it even if he didn't…
Yes, chambers really does seem like the right word…!
Isn't sleepy Loki the most adorable?!
Tony's so happy when Loki's there, I love that!
And the spaceship! Let's hope it works someday! That would be awesome!

Omg, THORoscope! Shit! That's hilarious!

It's so weird that Asgard's flat… But it would be weirder still if it wasn't… mhmhmhhhhhmmm

Oh! I'd almost forgotten about the 'mobsters'! So, Thiassi's allies, huh?
Wow, a Way between Alfheim and Vegas? That's actually really cool!
Of course Tony would ask! *rolls her eyes* bUT I DID NOT EXPECT THAT ANSWER! HE WILL SHOW HIM?! AJFNREJAÖIN!

NAJHKFLBC HJS! That's what I'm feeling! There's not anything specific I can comment right now, but not that my insides go INVJIESLBILA! when I read this…!

Of course Tony's insufferable without Loki around, hahah! Sulking and trying not to think about that he's IN A FRIKKIN' WAR ON ANOTHER PLANET, and just being…Tony.
Aww, I just love this so much! And I really love Pepper so much for being so cute and calm and…being so PEPPER! Mabhvcilabhj!
HAHAHAHAHHA, PEPPER I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! 'Between you and him, you're still the rational one', I love her, ahhhahhah!
'Pepper radar'?! JEsus, TOny! That's absolutely hilarious!
Yes! Loki has friends! And they love him! (pepper loves him, I don't know how many other friends he's got… And I'm not entirely sure Rhodey loves him…not sure at all in fact…njvkd)

Omg. The scene between Pepper's call and 'Loki the otter'…I just loved it. It just filled me with pure joy and happiness and that scene alone just… It was just perfect. PERFECT.

'Be the one running the game'. I love that. I'm just gonna leave that one right there. Love that. *whispers* love that…
'And what concern of theirs is it, if better is what others would call worse'. I love that too. It's just so them and so perfect and I am dYING BECAUSE THIS STORY IS SO PERFECT!

I love Loki's work in Vegas. It feels so calming when you describe it and when I read about it. yeah, it just calms me reading about it, it calms my feels - and I am grateful for that! (feels are too much sometimes)

Nononononononono, what iS HAPPENING?! IS MY TONY ALRIGHT? WHAT HAPPENED?! WHAT IS HE DOING?!
Oh, thank god he's alright…! (for now at least?)

THAT'S the Loki I like, the daring one. The one who dares anyone to say anything against him. I love it.

Wait. Thor fell out of that big hole? What. The. Heck?!
Okay, NOT Thor. Some other weird dude…
Oh my god! Ronan! Shit!? This is New York isn't it? The Incident?! But with Ronan leading it instead of Loki?!

Omg. I- What- I- … There are tEARS IN MY EYES! ACTUAL TEARS! I can't believe I've finished it, after such a long time! And I just can't believe it's over!? What?! No! I don't want it to be over!
But it was absolutely perfect. I loved every last bit of it and this story… Well you know exactly what it did to me and my poor feels, but I love it for it! I… I can't!
I can't believe it's over and I've already said that but I have no idea what to write! Mabhfdjiclb! I'm at a loss for words!

This story was absolutely amazing. Brilliant. Perfect. Awesome. Idek…
I am so happy how it turned out! The ending was so good and I wouldn't want it to have ended in any other way! It was perfect for them, and for the story and for everything!

I honestly LOVED this story. Honestly. I loved it as much as I would love a really good book series. I love it (almost at least, it's really hard to top) as much as I love Harry Potter. Do you get in what scale I'm talking about now? HARRY POTTER. MIRAGE. LOVE.
It's crazy.

I just hope you know how much I loved, and I know you do by now… I've basically said I loved it in every single comment I've ever made on this story… But still.

You are so incredibly talented and I just want you to know that. Take that in and…yeah. You are an incredible writer. Incredible! You are so amazingly talented it's crazy, and I wish I could ever be as good as you are!

Yeah, I should probably finish this comment now and join the rest of my family in…whatever it is they are doing…

But know that I am entirely sincere when I say, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS. YOU HAVE, WITH THIS STORY, MADE MY LIFE BETTER. REALLY.
I LOVE YOU.

(I didn't read this comment through, so I'm sorry if anything's really weird… I was very excited when I wrote this…hehehhe)
(Can't believe it's over! *sobs in a corner*)

Omg?! What the heck?! How? No, WHEN?! Jesus!

No, he has NOT left Tony, Thor! Of course he hasn't, you idiot!
HA HA! That's what you get when messing with my Tony!
But jesus christ, I just can't believe that Thor still underestimates and thinks mortals so…primitive and…bad at everything (can't find any good words…) after all he's seen on Earth… Like…whAT THE HECK?! Give us some credit, man!
Mah! A fight?! Oooohhh! Am I the only one who has kind of been waiting for this? I mean… Come on!?

Getting to know how Odin came to have 'adopted' Loki was nice, to know what he felt about it and what he felt during Loki's childhood… It was actually quite as I imagined it… Odin always being a bit…you know, but still kind of wanting to be a part of his son's childhood, but not quite being able to at the same extent as Frigga… Yeah… It was nice to know.

"Your master" - omg, I almost died laughing!
Wait. What the heck? Is S.H.I.E.L.D. here?!
Oh. He called them. Haha, that's what you get for not reading everything before commenting…
AHAHAHHA OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I JUST FEEL LIKE I'M GOING TO BURST!
I love Tony so much. I just lOVE HIM SO MUCH!

I WANT TO KNOW THOSE THREE CONDITIONS! NOT FAIR LEAVING US WAITING LIKE THAT!

Yay Thor! You finally made the right choice!

I hate Odin for hating on 'Lady Loki' like that! (I feel very strongly about this, haha) She is beautiful! Stop hating on my beautiful, super hot, and absolutely awesome Loki, you moronic, old, pig, Odin!

Oh! Those are quite good terms, aren't they? And wow, Odin *rolls her eyes*, he thought about someone else, for once! Of course I'll let him fight this war!" Really?
(Not that I don't like that Odin has got a heart after all, but cOmE oN, hahah. i kinda love it, but you know, still don't? Nah, I love it… Kind of?)

WHAT IS THAT ONE MORE THING? Anjibenifcbhdz!

Noooo! I only have one chapter left! Am I going to die? What will happen when I've read the last chapter?! I don't know about anything anymore! I AM LOST!

But maaahhhhh! This chapter was soo good! It was…legendary! (hehehhe) No, but seriously! It was really really good!
I love this story so much! *sobs into her hands*

Okay. But WOW.
The battle was kind of epic, just sayin'. At first I was a little, not disappointed (don't fear, I'm not done yet!) but not fully satisfied (?) with how the battle ended… (still not done) Of course I hoped that Loki would win, even though I didn't want him to go back to Asgard and leave Tony. He was defeated, and I didn't like that… You know… (still not done, keep calm)
But now I am not. I liked it. It ended well, they are not that mad at each other anymore and Loki will stay with Tony for at least a while longer. AND, I am not entirely sure Loki was defeated? Am I misinterpreting things here, but with how you places the over-laps (especially the last one) it feels like this kind of is what he planned? I am NOT sure, but it feels a little… Yeah, you know what I'm talking about?
(God, if a I am totally wrong right now I'm gonna be so embarrassed, jesus christ…!?)

So, this chapter was really cool. It was really REALLY COOL. I really liked the over-laps, they just made everything really perfect, and I am so glad that you did it this way instead of saying all that in the last chapter and make us have to remember the words at the right times. This just completed it and this is just so good! I don't really know if what I meant to say actually is written, because it is easy to misinterpret things (god, I hope I'm not wrong *hides her blushing face behind her hands*), so I really hope you get what I'm trying to say…

heheh…

Anyways! You know I loved this chapter as well, I mean…it was so good tho?! Like…really really good…

I just loved their hide-and-seek game…! I don't know, it was just so happy, pure and so so cute! It was adorable!

WOW. Loki is showing Tony his home?! This is…wow! I'm almost teary-eyed! This is…beautiful. He trusts Tony with this. I am so happy!

No! I don't like it when they fight! I know maybe it had to get out of them, you know… but still! It makes me want to hide under a table…
Omg. He PUNCHED HIM. I need a break, I'm sweating, this is really really scary…!
Okay, so that needed to be said… That doesn't mean I was scared to death the whole time and ready to flee… But it was good that it was finally said…
Aw, no! That was an illusion? All along?! No way, now I feel embarrassed out of no reason and shit…! No?!
Do you even low what you're doing to me with this story?! My poor heart! My poor FEELS! (I bet you know exactly what you're doing) *takes deep breaths* Okay, I'm calm now. Kind of. I'm still SHOOK, but I'm (mostly) fine. [jesus christ it feels like you're trying to kill me]

Soo, now everyone's arrived at (in?) Mercury… And now we're just waiting for the show to begin. I am scared, and really thrilled!

Wow, I loved this chapter! The feels are so real, and I just feel their happiness and their anger and it's just so… yeah, REAL. I doesn't even feel like I'm reading, it feels like I'm in the story, that it's happening around me, that I'm invisible in the same room as everybody else. And I love and adore that you can make me feel like that with your writing! I love it so much!
This chapter really was so so SO good! Really, I just can't… Wow. Just wow.

PS. I had a horrible and weird dream the other night… (no joke) I dreamt i finished this story. But it finished so abruptly, and I didn't even realized it had finished before I was trying to read the next chapter… I can't even describe the feeling, it was HORRIBLE. It was like the worst thing that ever happened. I cried. It just…ended. Just like that… And I didn't even realize it…
Seriously, I actually dreamed this… And that, if nothing else, must describe how much I care about and love this story… DS.

AAAAHhhhhh! My gooooddd! THor iS HERE!

Okay, so this was interesting…! And yes, I really really like how you write Thor, it really is how he was in the first movie before he came to Midgard. Wow, it's really good! It's just. YES, you know?

Um, anyways… That Mercury place seems odd, why are they meeting there? Hmm, I guess I'll find that out!

I like how Jane is like 'don't get attached! …but he's so cute… Nononono! Jane, pull yourself together! …but… No!' That's really funny, and cute… I really like Jane, she's just so great, she's so small but still so… darn it, I can't find the word… But you know what I mean? I really like her anyway! heheh

But maan! I just can't take that I only have four chapters left!? It's so weird! What am I supposed to do when I've finished it? I realized just now that it actually has an end, you know…? It felt so far away before, but now it's almOST HERE AND I AM DYING!?

Um, yeah. Really good chapter! I kind of like Thor, but I don't like that he's so arrogant and so 'above' the midgardians… and everybody else… It's just…not right. But he is at least kind, so I kinda like him anyways, hehhehehe

At "you know rings are more traditional, right?" I thought I missed something and that Loki was proposing with that bracelet or something! Omg! I was like, omgomgomgomgomg! but then I read the rest and was like, 'shit, I only read what I want to read…'
But still, man! You (scared?) me! hahhahaahah jeez!

I absolutely LOVED this chapter! WOW! I am so glad that Lokes found Ivan and killed him so Tony doesn't have to worry about that (not that he would have worried until it happened 'cause he didn't know he even existed… but ya know). Things are weird and he was already dying, so tat was good!
And now! The new core! Yay! I was waiting for this to happen! Now he isn't dying! Hurray!

Yeah, this chapter really was great! But I am sad I didn't catch that reference… I haven't read the boo, so it wasn't at all that weird, but still… I hate it when you know there's a reference there but you haven't read the book or seen the show or whatever, so you have no idea what it means…! It's so frustrating! (and I just have to add another book to my ever-growing never-ending list of books…)

And I just once again realized how much I love Tony Stark. I actually love him. I do. Really. He's just… Idek, I just love him…

Omg, "just me and my invisible friend" - I am dying, that's hilarious!
And jeez! When Loki just appeared out of nowhere! IT was sooo funny! And her face! Jane's face, I am dying!
And I love Darcy! Of course SHE would notice they're together, my lovely little whirlwind!

God, I loved this chapter!
It was nice to know a little more about Loki, and how Earth's stories about the Asgardians are sometimes based on rumors and gossip instead of facts.
But then it turned kind of sad… I keep forgetting Tony's dying when he's that happy and laughing and smiling and grinning. But then it hits you like a buss to the chest and… It's so sad. God, I hope they find a way to save him…!

Okay, so they know that Thor's coming. They want Jane and Erik and Darcy to find him and help him and kinda lead him to Loki? Right! I am soo excited to see how this goes, how it all plays out and how everyone meet and how everything gets solved! I am so excited!

I didn't read it by now, but I love you for the description. Gotta reaf it later sounds very promising. you'll hear from me

Omg this chapter! It was so happy! And Pepper's reaction! God, I love Pepper… She's awesome!
But just when everything is good something bad has to happen, right? I had almost forgotten about the poisoning! Shit, how could I?! And now it's a real problem! And shit shit shit! Tony's dying! Again!

You're killing me with this story, you know…! But I love it. And I couldn't die in a better way!