That was pretty cool. Will there be more

It is so very sad that so many stories with good or brillant ideas are never ended

I am surprised Sirius has not had a reason, if only to make people gape, to turn into his dog form.

You definitely need help in grammar and punctuation, which you should get if you had someone read over your chapters before posting. For example: "Well let's get walking Whiterun is the other side of that river" Alexandre replied pointing to the Castle town as they started walking a loud Howl could be heard two enormous Wolves Charged towards the group as the Mages Took Attack positions Sirius Suddenly yelled "Wait I know that Wolf" Sirius Approached the Wolf The creature stopping and almost smiling it stood on its back legs and Starting charging In place of the wolf stood Remus. Just what the heck is all this? You need a proofreader and a Beta to go over your work before you post. What I just typed was the very last sentence (?) of this chapter. While I like the idea of merging Harry Potter with Skyrim, this story is not well written!

Ok, writer to writer.

This story is decent, but the good thing is, I can't really find any grammatical errors, or spelling, so kudos to that. It does feel fast paced for being relatively short. Also, occasional errors on the quotation marks. Overall it is a good story.

very nice scene changes

So was Harry thrown into Askaban for what happen to Quille or was it something else.

I like the idea of this story and where it going. I would have Harry and Sirus meet the Dark Brotherhood and then have the little vampire girl turn Harry. Eventually the find Serana and Sirus is also turned into a vampire.

I read chapter one. Then chapter two. Then I skipped to chapter four...
If you intend to continue this, learn to punctuate. Please. Your current work gives me a god awful headache.

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I understand writing be a really low importance to you right now, but I was barely able to read this chapter. The lack of punctuation and strange placement of capital letters made understanding what you were trying to say challenging.

Yay! It seems that Remus is doing well with the Companions. I look forward to seeing how he's doing next chapter.

I wanna see Harry become an apprentice of the archmage and reveal a dragon soul within

I really like it May I ask if you intend for Harry to become a Son of Skyrim

seriously, what's with so many randomly capitalized words