Reviews for Time and Sand
StarlightBooks609 chapter 8 . 5/10
Oh this story is so good! I really hope it isn't abandoned...I wonder how the Order will handle the new changes in the tineline.
Citopal chapter 8 . 4/28
i really like how this fic is going! hope to see more soon.
goblin81 chapter 8 . 4/19
Not finding anything of interest in the new lists i have been reading the older stuff from authors i enjoy. I read this one in one sitting and i dearly hope your muse brings you back around to it. Its an intriguing what if, it has great potential. While time travel is a common trope often the protagonist shows up seeming omnipotent because of the amount of foreknowledge. You get around this by using the force and cannons lack of detailed history. How he got where he is, what happened to Leia, will he get everyones favorite jade... best wishes for your health in these troubled times.
MopsyFleabert chapter 8 . 4/16
This is such an interesting idea! I so hope you continue!
mastercheif1229 chapter 7 . 3/8
Incredible story so far! I really hope that you continue it at some point!
RevanTheGrey411 chapter 8 . 3/6
Really love this story hope you decide to continue it.
Lil Lost Lady chapter 8 . 1/17
Well becoming a knight already is probably for the best considering that he likely will be targeted like they think, poor Luke gaining so much attention in his short time in the past. Since you brought it up I wonder who Anakin's master will be this time around, Qui-Gon's still alive but both Obi-Wan and Luke are now knights and he has a bond to Luke already... hmm. Would it be better to keep him with Luke or try to expand his bonds? Anyways it's been a while since this was last updated so I have a feeling I'll be waiting a while to find out more. Thanks for the interesting story so far!
Lil Lost Lady chapter 6 . 1/17
Well that answers my question about Padme so Luke doesn't know she's his mother, did he never find out in the movies? I don't remember guess I'll need to pay extra attention when I watch the movies again, though I never watched more than the original six (though I do know what happens in the newer ones as my friends spoiled them for me) so maybe he found out in or before the events of the newer movies? I wonder how much he can change with Yoda on his side well he already saved Qui-Gon so that's an improvement.
Lil Lost Lady chapter 5 . 1/17
Does Luke know that Padme is his mom? He's referred to Anakin as his dad inside of his mind but not her as his mom. As far as pairings go well can Luke still exist if his parents don't get together? Other than that only Anakin and Luke have spent any real time together so I'll just have to wait and see who I think might fit together in this story before suggesting them.
USA-Jeanette chapter 8 . 1/1
Wow! This was incredible to read. i loved the character development and seeing the ripples Luke is causing o the timeline. I eagerly await more! Thank you so much for your hard work and effort!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/25/2019
Episode II takes place ten years after Episode I. I thought you'd have Luke train with Yoda for about two to five years before making him a Jedi Knight. Seems like you're rushing things. The story is still really good and I hope you come back and write more chapters for it someday. I'd love to read more.
mastercheif1229 chapter 8 . 12/25/2019
Incredible story so far! I hope that you continue it at some point!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/11/2019
Some area seem like they're being rushed, but otherwise this is a really amazing story. Shame you're not updating it.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/8/2019
Best. Story. EVER!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/8/2019
Update.
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