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Thx for the great chapter.
I loved the match between CRDL and CRME, or more like between Cardin and CRME.
But sadly, Cardin has any right to be nervous, 'cause he just became a threat to Cinder's plan. An obstacle they will be more than happy to remove after this defeat.

Cute idea with the date for Elizabeth and Jaune, especially liked the touch of reuniting with the guy they saved during the Breach. Jaune will need all the emotional boost he can get.

Keep up the good work.

This version of Jaune is similar to Felix from RVB, who is also voiced Miles Luna.

For Cardin, how you handled a redemption for him. Thats how you do it! Great work!

From the jaws of defeat, the Cardinal's eagle has done the impossible and snatched victory from it! Hehe... Exposed Mercury's prosthetics early on is already a win, and his Semblance, Clarity, proved to be a good counter for Emerald's semblance.

Cardin's victory over Cinder is the most unexpected, and it is the unexpected return of the mace proved decisive.

Now Cardin has a target on his back, and they're taking it personally.

Oh no! It's Elizabeth! And the Arc has sent their agents.

It's good, but it could use just a bit more punctuation.

You've done it you madlad you actually did it, you made me like cardin.

This story better not be dead, because this chapter was fucking excellent and Cardin's a kickass, name taker in this fic and I love it.

Can't beleuve there has a been a fair bit of update since the last time i read it! Love the story qlqays but maybe a twist is that jaune actually been away in his expriewnce longer than aminth due to the tear n dimension travel to really highlight his skill growth...furthermoee cinder gonna be pisssssss she got thrash with her entire team by cardin as well neo also gonna be piss at cardin...who knows neo be part of cardin harem as his yandere lover hahaha...be funny if jaune does end up with two woemn pryhha n elizabeth...can see the story branch out either way...or if a cool moment where team rwby is down ,injured n weak and at the moment they thought they gonna die Ruby remembered a promise jaune made to her whenever she is over her head and in danger...need a rescue he will be there and he appears at the last moment protecting her from the imminent death and pats her head saying it will be alright, why ? Cause I am here now

Cardin has made some very powerful enemies.

God damn you really don’t give jaune any breaks, do yah?

Oh my GOOOOOOD why do you do that shit when the reveal is interrupted right in the middle of it? Fuuuuuuuuuuuck every author and there mom does that shit and it’s always the worst!

Ok the voice in his head is a bit weird.

Haha little bitch. Fuck you jaune