This is so cute and adorable and wonderful and I absolutely love it!

This is perfect

This was good! I can't think of any suggestions to improve it. I liked it a lot. The pacing was good, fast and entertaining but with enough development of each scene, and the emotions/characterisations felt quite... calm? As in not overly intense or dramatic at any point? I don't know if that's what you were going for but I quite liked it. It was a relaxing work. Thanks for writing it!

Awe, I feel SHOU happy for them
THIS WENT SO WELL YOU SEEM TO HAVE THIS DOWN PAT
I love this too much, I need to find more Ritshou fics rn.
Please continue to write, you're great at it!
AHH I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING DUDE
STAY SAFE