Reviews for Fateful Restaurant
SomeRand0m chapter 1 . 6/8
Please make more sorina
H.S Wallace chapter 1 . 4/13
My cold heart has been warmed
Lunox chapter 1 . 9/21/2018
I think this story was well done
last november chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
very fluffy
phoenixcloudburst chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
Aww it's cute. I like their moment but i want to see her employees' reactions hehe. Anyway, it's good.
Saiyuki729 chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
this was very cute i loved it
woofyy chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Cute story :) good luck with your future stories :)
CherCee chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
aww this is cute!
Cosmonaut Vyn chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
not my fav pairing, but its very enjoyable. i have a problem like Aguestmaybe: the romance was a bit confusing ahaha, enjoyed it though. well done
seisaoftw chapter 1 . 3/27/2017
Please more.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2017
That was sweet and very enjoyable thank you for writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2017
I love this couple so much! Great one shot!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
Awww so sweet! Loved it :D
nakirierinah chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
THIS IS AMAZING! Wooow. You need to write more! So much potential!
Aguestmaybe chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
I like how you wrote her perspective of the scenario, but there was one thing that kept bothering me after reading it: the line/s where she thought she locked away her feelings for him so I interpreted it as they hadn't stepped up in their relationship from "as friends." That made me confused for awhile until I came into her clarification regarding her thoughts where they already made out and just that she hadn't really appreciate it or Souma was too "stubborn" and left her for a couple of years. It may be your way to make us, readers, fantisise about it.

In any way, this is not a criticism of how "vague" was your writing with Erina's thoughts, although it might have been, maybe it's just me being amused and confused at the same time. Many thanks for your contribution to the ship! I'm looking forward to your future writings.
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