Wow, this is good. Are you still updateing? If I'm sounding too pushy, slap me.

Pretty awesome story! I love the battle scene!

I think you might want to break the fourth wall a little less, Though. It is very funny! But, too much of it can take away from the story.

I'm really enjoying this! Keep up the great work!

This is really good so far. Keep up the good work!