Really enjoyed this - the electric moments of first touches and comfort found in someone !

This short story draws you in and makes you want another and another page.

Keep writing!

you wrote it! thank god i did my stalker. haha. well, its not the answer I wanti want more. but i see sequel. gonna read that. now.

I must have more. Why is there not more?

I think ive said this already but just in case you don't know... I love how you write! any fic, be It blam or bram or Jarchie? you capture the characters essence so well! It's like I can picture them feeling and saying what they say on your fics.

Keep it up Aimes!

Awesome start. Can't wait to read more.

This is so good! I love how...complex and nuanced everything is. On the one hand it felt like this innocent, joyful exploration for both guys, but at the same time it also felt a bit like...well like a violation (but still sort of in an innocent way if that makes sense). All in all there was this really outstanding, complicated vibe of trust and safety yet insecurity and fear. At different parts it felt like this huge, wonderful thing happening in their relationship and other points like this major incident they'll never be able to overcome. I also don't know whether to feel like they can make this work or if there are irreconcilable differences.

I know this is a cruddy review without specifics but that's because the fic blew my mind and I don't know how to feel/what to think. BUT I do know that happy or tragic or whatever else, I absolutely loved it and CAN'T WAIT to read more about these characters in this story universe!

Amazing job! Such a rich, full character experience with incredible depth and insight into Archie's and Jug's feelings!