I think you should keep writting it's really well written and i'm liking it.

I'm confused... part way thru this you changed her name from Chrisa to Jane? Is it just a typo?

While I am indeed liking this story, I do have one suggestion. That you put the 'pilot' in the Front of the story, and not the back.

Well, I want more.

I honestly like the idea of recruiting the clone. It'd add a twist to the game.

There is not enough FemShep/Tali in the world, if you have the itch then please scratch it.