When is the next big update on this glorious work of art?

Hm, this raises an interesting question. Could Victor use his power on Taylor and steal her skills?

Ya know, this seemed like it was gonna be some gritty sci fi war kinda story. And the potential is still there, but its kinda taking a backseat to all this wholesomeness. And I am strangely ok with it.

I don't know, its nice, Its a bit annoying that some omakes took up whole chapters but whatever. It was a nice read.

Kenny scared the crap out of Armsmaster. As for the Halloween costumes, bad pun

Having fun reading. Can't wait to see how Bolo Trained Taylor interacts with PRT and other local heros.
Great writing. Don't listen to the naysayers, they can't do what you do so well. So they love to criticize.
-C

first, I wanna say great story the writing, the history, the action, and the comedy it's all awesome.

it's just that you mostly focus on the slice of life and the reaction of what the tayminator when I think it would be even better if you focused on how Taylor and Kenny and developing.

am mostly waiting for when she Annnihilates lung and the endbringers, I know am rushing but it's getting boring honestly.

hopefully, u take what I sed into consideration

Please go spend some time on incompatible system. These other stories are great, but incompatible system is your best, I think. It's been so long without an update~ ;-;

This story just keeps going on and on and on and doesn't really go anywhere. This chapter was what, 10k words? It took me almost a full day to read because I just couldn't keep the desire to read it. It also doesn't help that the chapters spit in the face of centuries of writing and aren't in fucking chronological order, jumping by months at a time, forwards and backwards, or millenia if you count the omake. It's very irritating to read even with the timestamp at the beginning of the chapter. So far, in 19 chapters and probably close to 150k words, we have gone exactly four scenes from the start. The gas station robbery, the police station, the assault on the police station, and bringing Taylor's mom home from the hospital. That's it. There was a lot of jumping back, but no forward progress. If this story made any sense, it would have started with the gas station, then jumped back to the meeting between Taylor and the BOLO, and then STARTED FROM THERE. Going through the training, explanations, domestic scenes in the order that they HAPPENED, then going through the gas station in full and continuing chronologically from there. NOT jumping around the timeline like a rabbit on cocaine. I feel like you wrote this in order of scenes that you wanted to write at the time, like you got the idea for the ME omake, the Armsmaster scene, etc and then just wrote them, ignoring the greater story and ripping the timeline to shreds. That's not the way a story works and it doesn't make for good reading.

I do want to see the reactions on the rig

Atleast they did not send Hedgewick to negoate

That was well written, but really should have been it's own story.

Ok I really love this story but it’s really starting to drag.

Huh. Didn't expect to see Doctor West using his Miskatonic education for good. I'd say Dean Halsey is rolling in his grave, but, well...

Great to see some behind the scenes. Really looking forward to more of what happened to Taylor. Great job

Another nice slice of life chapter, but I do look forward to seeing Taylor and Kenny starting to build up their opererations.