I enjoyed reading this fic and their are funny parts that made me laugh.

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

I don't get why some people say such rude things can't they just enjoy it and I think its great there are some things that could be improved on but we all learn writing skills as time moves forward
PS do you think you could add one lemon with the the chainsaw twins just a possibility if you happen to hit writers block to stall for time if you need to finish or start on a new chapter
Keep calm
And
Stay sane

I don't get why some people say such rude things can't they just enjoy it and I think its great there are some things that could be improved on but we all learn writing skills as time moves forward
PS do you think you could add one lemon with the the chainsaw twins just a possibility if you happen to hit writers block to stall for time if you need to finish or start on a new chapter
Keep calm
And
Stay sane

Not going to lie here dude but I think if you want to make a story on this site & draw in readers you need to scrap all your unfinished ones. There is no point starting multiple stories to then scrap them or leave them dead on the water after the 3rd or even 2nd chapter. If you really want to make a story of your own work then putt passion into it & stick with, plan ahead in your story, ask for ideas, make the reader feel involved in a story that you create because I’ve seen reviews on your stories & people aren’t getting the plot or characterisation within those stories and being a reader of some of your stories it is a let down when you start up an interesting story with a good title that draws people in to then realise I see your name as the author & instantly loosing interest as you just don’t take stories far or finish.
I may be harsh with my review bur it’s my honest opinion & hope you do take my advice given & for whatever story you do next I just hope it lasts.

you changed his
whole personality

In this Story is no structure at all.

Not good!

Seriously is Akashi gonna be a gag harem character since she wants both Issei and Valid? Or will she realize "love" later on or something, maybe Vali turns out to be a girl and just kept the disguise up for a long time in fear of his grandfather trying breed her.

So does that mean akashi is in both Issei and Vali'd Harem? You didn't really clear that up

Why didn't Issei beat up Riser, or challenge Vali when he needed him alive? Why is he such a passive bitch in this story man, he's a dragon and they have pride but you seem to still put him into a passive side bitch character not a sleeping dragon.

this is 1 of your story's that i do hope you will keep writing as it is a very good read keep going thanks

chapter 7 please

tsubaki

Meh, you say that he doesn't want to involve himself with the supernatural but he still fixes all their problems and listens to the like a lost puppy, at least don't advertise the story as a cool, uncaring issei when he does everything anyways.