please continue

Great story! I really hope you continue

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Another one bites the dust.

huh.

Cette histoire est incroyable je suis impatient pour la suit

bro stop putting dialogue and the said on two different lines. it's really fucking annoying

1 Mordred she's the strongest stronger than qrow and raven except raven with fall maden power they will be evenly matched but in the end Mordred will win ( she will be severely damaged but she will win in the end )

2 Jaune lately has been little annoying and he constantly glares ( from vomit boy to glare boy )

3 the third one is not something important but I want to address it when Yang heard jaune tell " strangers are friends you don't know yet " she will roll her eyes or at least Mordred will roll her eyes

I like the story it's good but to tell you the truth I only read it because it has Mordred I and some people don't give two shits about Jaune ( sorry if it sounds rude :[ )

This is just cruel and unusual punishment with such cliffhanger! Haha on another note hope to see the story continue as I would love to see the character developement and some happiness for what will happen to Pyrrha? Will she live or will she die or will Jaune and Mordred save her or Mordred thinking she fail due to Jaune "sCrifice" ir will Pyrrha become aini harem with jaune and modred due to her clamming her man must be one surpassing a king and as such must have at least one concubine hahaha... Bea funny story and maybe Mordred will be the tsundere type it seem haha.. Hope you are doing alright and the story does continue

can't wait to see the fight

I assumed the story been abandoned, such a damn shame really.

please update!

"And it was going so well"
Realy though RIGHT when it gets interesting

And like that you lost me litterly you can take nikos out and nothing would change she is not needed and quiet frankly detracts from the story

Actually it's not exactly pointless seeing how Aura is a amplifier and give symblece but most importantly sparing classes and tournament run on Aura ratings so she's will either need it or a alternative then again who can say.

:Loading Up Information: Dirt in the eyes is not clean, painless or without risk of permanent injury. It feels like small bits of metal is on your very eyes and each time you blink at all or even start to it grinds into the eyeball causing damage. Flushing it out with water, or even a professional tool, can take many minutes.

Until you start the washing process even the natural watering of the eyes is unlikely to get the dirt out. The person is blinded until they get help as if it is in both eyes they literally can not see at all or only very little with great pain.

Infection from the dirt along with the small scrapes it makes can happen. Generally eye drops are issued to people that have had dirt in their eye(s) for a period of time and at times antibiotics.

Depending where the dirt gets it has a chance of doing permanent damage to needing glasses where otherwise you wouldn't, losing the ability to see colors in full as you could before and more easily suffering from eyestrain in life.

There is also a chance how well you see in light or dark can be effected negatively.

:Unloading Information: Sorry about that but so many people use that as not being very dangerous or realizing how much damage/pain it can cause. People need to do some minor research.

:Loading Up Information: Being knocked out while not always can result in a concussion. Concussions generally mean loss of memory, not being able to remember what they are doing at any given time or if they have even eaten. It can cause slurring of words, repeating words, a reduction in articulation and asking questions to things that were just answered.

You could also experience dizziness, nausea, headaches or migraines. It can be brought on via any movement, even something as simple as turning the head, sounds at any volume, light at any intensity, or movement as mentioned previously.

It can take three weeks on average for most of the symptoms to relieve themselves of existing however there are many cases where the above symptoms last not only months but well over a year. Enough cases have been had that it is not considered rare.

:Unloading Information: Sorry again but people use that all the time with training. They just watch movies, cartoons or video games it seems and no absolutely nothing of real life scenarios to things. While that wouldn't be a problem they take them as gospel and do not both even doing ten minutes of research which would easily be enough to show the major differences.

Good luck on the story and I truly hope you don't continue with the cliches of such serious things being a laughing matter.