Good story, just driving me insane with the my mia bella. Mia mean my so all your saying my my bella

Bella is an idiot for trusting Bonnie. Bonnie is an idiot who should learn her grandma died because of cancer. If Bonnie's grandma was not strong enough then she should of never done it but it was her grandmother s choice Bonnie needs someone to whoop her ass.

I loved how Charlie told off Billy. I am so happy for Damon and Bella. I am glad Charlie s going to move with Bella. I hope him and Liz hit it off. He deserves happiness. I think Elena is going to cause trouble. Thank you

Wow Bella after all this time is going to let Edward keep her from Forks and to make Charlie to always go to see her. Bella is selfish and needs to get over Edward I mean come on it has been 5 years.

I loved your story! I did want to let you know though that the majority of it you had Damon refer to her as "my Mia Bella" that translates to literally "my my beauty" I'm sorry you had so many issues with people here it sucks when petty people pull that and don't realize most people don't care about their negative opinions

Thank you for this story. It's really well written. I'm sorry there's a bunch of butt heads being dicks on this sight. I understand your reason for stopping even though it makes me sad. I hope everything goes right for you in the future. Keep being awesome!

I thought it was a great story and am sorry to see it end. Until I read your last chapter, I was hoping you had written more stories. Thank you for sharing your story

i always disliked the mutts, so self righteous.

I LOVVVVVE IT

this was definitely a great story keep on writing and doing what you do and don't listen to the negative people you are awesome!

I think this was a great story! thank you for sharing! I'm sorry you've had issues with people's comments, I have as well and it's very discouraging. keep writing!

Okay story

Huge freaking flaw. Bella's in Seattle and Damon is in Chicago, yet they meet? That's the stupidest mistake I've ever seen. You really need to fix that.

Loved the story! Sucks that you got negative reviews though! My mom always says, the people that know 'best' aren't actually doing it. Hope to read more from you!

I love the character development for Charlie Swan. Not a lot of writers incorporate him in the story or build up his character. This is refreshing. damon is a bit sappy for my taste but love the storyline.