Carn't wait for more

Thanks for the update and screw anyone who complains about spelling or whatever. You are taking time out of your life to write and share your work with us, we thank you for that. I hope Harry gives everyone hell, kill with kindness and hard work lol.

That was a shock - that Harry is such a lowlife...or at least he seems to be. Kind of came out of left field. Intriguing that he is working with Grendelwald. I wonder what those two are up to. Very interesting developments. Update soon please!

Off to a very interesting start! Loved all of the digs at Fleamont's marriage contract! All of the details were great! One thing I might ask you to do is to paint a picture of the character's surroundings. It was lacking in the first scene and it took me a while to figure it out. Excellent plot. It felt a bit James Bondish and I laughed when I saw the allusion to Harry being an assassin. I like Daphne and Harry as you have developed them here. Her family is fun, too, especially Astoria (are you a virgin?!). Great job! I hope you will update soon!

Please finish this story!

SYMPA

Oh yea... why I stopped reading this one... dozing Daphne with Love Potion, is such a Weasley trick. Sorry, but if you put that in the story, I am out of here

Nice update

Interesting, will see how it progresses

Good plot, but story needs a bit of proofreading and polishing. A few missing words and grammatical errors here and there. Also, maybe add more descriptive elements and prose to the dialogue so that your story reads better, in a more mature manner of storytelling. I look forward to the next update.

too short

Second chapter not holding me as well as the first. Awaiting more.

Come on man...I was like... finally there's an update...nd then... puffff... nothing... eagerly waiting for the update nd dame good story btw

Any chance of you updating this story any time soon ?

Can’t really tell if you’re doing a “mr and mrs Smith” style story with married spies or not.