Finally!
I know I've waited some time for this but it was SO worth it!

The flowers were such a sweet gesture, Gods, I'm melting...

Huh? Maryse and Robert agreed with this so easy? Where are the strict parents, who put work, honor and duty above all? Guess this is a good change, a very good one indeed... Very few fics (especially canon) go for good parents when it comes to Robert and Maryse, I love it!
...I think I've told you that before :D

And now they finally, leave to find the author.

Hope you're not making me wait another year for the next one... but I'll nag you on WhatsApp if that's the case :D

Love you 3

The level of cuteness in thos chapter is over 1000. I'm dying

So glad Magnus let Alec explain. The hell with Clave and all those stupid rules. They are ment to be together! End of story!

And now... where is the next chapter? Who wrote the diary? What happened with that boy/man who wrote it? Will malec met with him?

Want more... Gimme more Maud!

oh gods...

EEK! Malec!
I love your style of writing, very unique.

This is really well written! This is such a great story!

An amazing end to this ‘long’ one shot!
I really love the way you developed the meeting, and what I like the most is the evidence you gave to Magnus’ hurt: you didn’t make it too easy for Alec to get his love back, and it took something more than a few words to melt Magnus heart again, and this made the whole thing much more real and believable. Your words flow easily, giving the characters’ emotions a strong intensity that I really appreciate, and making us perfectly understand both Alec and Magnus feelings.
So good, I’ll be waiting for your next story!

Wow. This was amazing. Your word choice was fantastic. So deep and meaningful. And I'm happy you didn't just make Magnus all happy right away. You did justice to their characters with this. And of course- AWWW. SO SWEET. I'm happy that diary made Alec realize what he wanted! That old shadowhunter mist he smiling down from heaven haha. Beautifully written! Thanks for this.

And so sweet of you to mention me there! You siding have to. Really happy I could help you wrote this masterpiece in some way though.

Oh wow! Nicely done. That beginning part was so clever! You wrote it perfectly! So that we disinterested even notice it didn't mention his name... I legitimately thought it was Alec! And then that ending speech his gave! And Alec's part of course rocked. Awww. Being true to himself and going to see Magnus... beatiful work.

Such a beautifully written one-shot!

For your first story, this is amazing. Your words flow easily as if they were meant to be together. Word choice was amazing.

You added so much description, its as if I can imagine everything inside my head and picture the character's issues scene-by-scene. Like a movie.

You added so much emotion for a 3rd person point-of-view story! That touched the feels, quite a bit.

The ending! SUCH A SUPRISE for me! The simple idea of someone else's experience that is similar to Alec's from the past giving our beloved Alexander the strength and willingness to flee and escape his prision of secrets and be finally content with his life was so fantastic.

I can't wait to read more of your work.

~xox ShamsXX

Such a beautiful one shot! your writing is very good, words flow easily and I love the way you managed to put into words that sense of being trapped, of having no way out.
The end was totally unexpected for me, and the idea of someone else’s diary giving Alec the courage to run away and be happy was amazing.

Thanks and I’ll be waiting for the next one :)

Absolutely love this story already! Can't wait to read more!

Loved the suspense and the powerful ending. Please write chapter two!