!that was so freakin hot ... Wow

I'm enjoying reading this story

This is the cutest thing i have read in awhile i love it. All of it. I am giggling with joy and yay. Cant wiat for more! Ypu are a fantastic writer
- gyspywitch19

Ok... Okokokok, from the first look into each others eyes I SO SHIP MONTE AND ERIC OMFG! XD Why did you create such a perfect ship in the first paragraph? But I'm also cringing at the fact his family is so catholic, and he's fallen for a boy instantly! I can see hell has to come before their happy end.
As much as I usually don't get into new characters, yours are introduced and plotted out so well, you can't help but love them. And the deep discussion at the end with all their parents was sobering but placed so well.
YAY next chapter has good Kevedd moments! Can't wait! :D

This is a really cute chapter! :)

SUCH a great story! I love the length of the chapters and the plot is wonderful. I'm excited to see where this goes with Edd and Kev. How they're going to develop as friends and as more. And getting to know them as characters first before all the fluff is great. Makes me care about them so much more, even these btw characters! I also loved Marie in the first chapter. Portrayed her perfectly.
Kevin being so physically comfortable with hugging and what not seems kind of out of character, however his passion is spot on, I think. I noticed some spelling or grammar mistakes but simple things easy to ignore.
LOVE LOVE LOVED the hat scene! That was too adorable! Also them on the couch and Kevin basically fawning over Edd... yeah, that was golden.
Can't wait to read more and get to the really deep stuff with Kev and D! I'm so glad this is a recently updated story!

please continue! this is really good