I've gotta get this of my chest, i pity Franny, mostly because i've been in her position before, to love someone so deeply and be rejected simply for the way you talk. Krystal was being a cold bitch to a innocent.

Bahhahhahaa great chapter congrats

WHY DID YOU END IT THEREEEEEEE

The downside of being a princess several times over. I guess old frat politicians exist with every species. Depressing thought. XD

Me just reaching the “you can do betterTF THEY JUST SAY!? KILL THEM KRYS!) and oh jeez franny biggest fan girl

I’m not sure if now is the best time to do a political chapter with all the BS going on, but hey you do you.

Also, I know exactly how Krystal feels, I knew a girl that and god I hated her. Every time she spoke I honestly wanted to rip my own ears off.

And I know what it’s like to be pressured into a relationship, my parents and even my own Grandaddy did it to me numerous times before I put my foot down.

I just hate politics. If I were in Krystal's position, I'd just go doom guy on those old coots and call it a day, no other incursean would mind.

A neat start to this idea. Krystal sorta going through what Ben had to for Looma and Attea in the very beginning. It's neat. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Also, thanks for clarifying where Jed is.
One final question, are Franny and Swift gonna join the harem, or are they just gonna be stalkers and fangirls?

Honestly I expected Greer to almost lose then come rising from the ashes a winner but still that was heart warming to read, also thought two two would be the first to get prego but still Interesting

Hey there.
Wow, it was sad to hear about Greer's mom, I'd be worried that Greer would face something similar soon but with the way the chapter ended I think she'll have to take a break from competition (huh, never would've guessed Greer to be the first mother in the harem). Still, I was really hoping she'd manage to win, but oh well, so is life, at least her opponent was nice and respectful, I really hate when someone is a jerk and still manages to win (or wins and then acts like one), be it fiction or real life.

By the way, this probably would've been better to ask last chapter but it hit me just a bit ago, does Ship count as an "official" Plumber? As in having her own rank, mission record, pay and such, or is she like an special case to be able to accompany Krystal in her duties?

Excelent chapter, keep up the good work and take care guys.

Great chapter and great fight congrats

So Ben's gonna be a grandpa, can't wait to see his reaction to the news.

Ben’s going to celebrate like crazy when he finds out he’s going to be a grandpa

Also while I like that you gave character to Swift since she was pretty much a drone with a cool design in the show
She’s creepy and should be thrown in the Null Void
In front of a Vulpimancer

Good chapter

Wait, she wants to have a baby with Greer first instead of TwoTwo? And what about the other girls? I mean I get why she did it with her first specifically, but still. It just seems unfair.

Greer is awesome. Glad that Krystal keeps her grounded. :)

I wonder how Ben will react to becoming a grandfather.

Most of all, I'm still curious as to what Ben will think and do when he learns that Bad Ben slept with his daughter. XD