I hope you are doing well and staying healthy during these times and not frying in the heat. I look forward to the day you come back to this story.

Wah im getting towards the end of the updates! I wanna keep reading this story for forever!

Forever squeezing over how cute this is 3
So good!

Ohh man! I love your story, I really hope to read more! You’re a very talented storyteller!

Dude In laughing so hard at the end here

Hello,

I found your story by sorting thro favorite (Your was the number 1 did you know that? Among thousand of FMA fic :), it really awesome) and reading the review I found out that you didn't have the chance to finish it.

I was really reluctant to read it but boy oh boy, how stupid I was.

Your story was incredible, thank you very much for sharing it with all of us. And wherever you are, I hope you are safe and doing great.

This story is so great. It's beautifully written and you definitely put a lot of thought of Dawn
s characterization. It is comfortably paced, and the relationships between the main characters are well thought and very realistic. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Hey, I just finished this and I love it. So good! I love Dawn and Roy and Ed and Al and ahh... I cried at her grandfather's death lol, rip me, but ahhh. Very good. No complaints.
I hope you're doing well and everything is okay, stay healthy!

Mustang seems to be becoming a bit contrary

Wow this story is soo cool. I love it! I hope for updates if possible! ️️️️️️

Amazing chapter! I love Dawn so much

I love it! When are you going to update again? I want to read more.

This was amazing! This is the very first time I've read a fic with an insert character that I actually like; Dawn is amazing! I love this story, and hope to get to see more of it soon!

Update!

Beautifully written, interesting, and so welcoming to see how it has developed! What I love is the bonds she develops with different people! I can’t wait until the plot develops more since at this moment I feel like it’s dancing around a linear plot over where the story is headed since she’s still pretty young and the events haven’t really taken root yet. For example, I feel like it’s been very slice of life so far and not much actual action. I just can’t wait for more since I really love the story!