Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

These three new chapters have been WONDERFUL sweetie! I’ve loved every moment of them! Particularly the bits with Jack and Inara and sweet King Charles! Hehe, I’m a little too brain dead to think of much more intelligent to say about it right now, but just know that as always I LOVED it! And I definitely can’t wait for more!

This story has potential, the setup is good, and as a character Lucinda seems like a solid one...However the thing with her and Will...I understand that the case with them involves some serious ”attraction at first sight” but they are both behaving somewhat improperly while with each other taken the period of time and its codes of conduct, especially between a man and a woman, and when they have known each other for such a short time...Especially Will is acting somewhat too forward by caressing a young lady’s cheek, one that not to mention is of station unlike him, not to mention hugging her so outwardly in her own bedroom while alone, even as a character in the first movie Will seems like someone who follows the rules of society, for example calling Elizabeth with an honorific and rejecting her more familiar way of treating him despite of his love for her (in the canon anyway), as is expected of him.
So yes, I get that he and Lucinda are greatly enamored with each other, just would suggest toning down a bit any manner of more forward gestures of affection between them, until their relationship is more developed and their feelings possibly will grow, which would give reason to Will to drop his gentleman like manner enough to discard those rules of propriety to express his attachment more openly...like giving her face a passing caress.
Well anycase this comment expanded way too much, but is not meant to be seen as an insult. Just a bit too elaborately crafted notion of a one thing that has caught my attention during the last few chapters

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

This is AWESOME! Please continue to update it.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

please continue, can't wait to see who the woman with Jack is and how the story will evolve

Another great chapter. I am glad that you are back. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Hello! I know this story is on hiatus but I truly hope you find the inspiration to continue writing. In just 3 captors I have been completely captivated by the story you have just begun to tell and I hope I'll have the pleasure to be able to read more!

This is sich a great story! Please update soon, I’m dying to know how Lucinda will adjust to her new life and how her relationships with Barbossa and Norrington will continue! Much love

omg i absolutely love how you have incorporated the secret garden into this book. LOVE IT SO MUCH... please update

Hey, I really really liked this. Please continue!

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