Reviews for Collision Course
Sweet Scrifice chapter 2 . 10/11/2018
Its been a while since I read something so good! The whole soul mate mark is not really my thing but its interesting to read about mismatched marks! I like that it blends so well with the original story and still makes it unique! I really enjoyed reading it!
Celestia's Paladin chapter 2 . 11/15/2017
I will admit "soulmate marks" fic aren't my cup of tea, I tend to find them as copouts and frankly rather creepy at times given pairs involved. But the summary got me, Ichigo thinking it's all BS, marks not matching? Hell when I got in and Orihime thinks it's rather silly is something. You got yourself a reader
echosong258 chapter 2 . 6/7/2017
OMGOMGOMG! I have half a mind to throw myself on the ground and scream that at the top of my lungs as I freak out.
Which would be very bad considering I'm at work.
I had read the first chapter on tumbler and promptly saved it. Imagine my surprise when I saw it here too and that it had a second chapter.
I absolutely 100% NEED to know what happens next! I do hope you continue this, it's simply amazing.
Kuchiki24 chapter 2 . 5/12/2017
well that drew me in fast! i can't wait for what's to come next!
constellarism chapter 2 . 4/21/2017
omg i love this fic so much 3. i hope you'll update soon!
shipfiend chapter 2 . 4/14/2017
MOTHER TRUCKER. YOU ARE GETTING ME. And you know...it's like I am re"watching" the series...before it went to heck. I never actually finished, so honestly, all these names and happenings are fuzzy, but the important stuff is still memorable. I like how you weaved your fic into canon...and well, I'm with you. I'll wait...forever how long this takes...to correct the error that is reality...that is the ending...I need this. P.S. I love it, ktb.
shipfiend chapter 1 . 4/14/2017
DUDE. OMG, WOWOWOWOWOWOW/ 1) Yes, let's realize that Ichigo was literally so depressed and only realizes he has friends and love and life after Rukia. 2) OMG, yes, yes, yes, I don't even know what to say but yessssssssss- this is my ship, son. Ugh. Cries. Dies. It's over, but it's not/ Ugh, I love it.
goldenrock chapter 2 . 3/26/2017
Ksnsbsi rhdjvsj your writing is out of this world!
EvoxKei chapter 2 . 3/26/2017
Ugh, so much for mentioning I made an account to review! Much love!

"Ooh I really liked the ending line. I recently made an account to review works in the ichiruki fandom. There are so many incredibly talented people and I just want to give my two cents and hopefully my words are of encouragement. The reason I find this insanely intriguing is because you incorporate your story in Canon. I think that's awesome and I hope you continue. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)"
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26/2017
Ooh I really liked the ending line. I recently made an account to review works in the ichiruki fandom. There are so many incredibly talented people and I just want to give my two cents and hopefully my words are of encouragement. The reason I find this insanely intriguing is because you incorporate your story in Canon. I think that's awesome and I hope you continue. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
margecamins chapter 2 . 3/18/2017
Waaaah. Reading something new and IchiRuki is the best pastime. I'm loving this fic already. I hope you update soon. :)
LeeHimeChan chapter 2 . 3/17/2017
In love with your story!
Amazing!
Please, update as soon as you can!
jobananasan chapter 2 . 3/16/2017
I liked "...there's a Rukia-shaped hole in the fabric of his world..."

I don't think I've ever read a fic where Inoue is referred to as "debris." *chuckle* She pretty much summed up how I feel about this whole soulmate mark. I have no romantic bone in my body but this whole concept reeks of superficiality. But I like how her mark is a rain drop. Very fitting.

So the whole time I'm thinking Uryuu's mark is also a rain drop. It would explain why he's having an internal hissy fit and why he didn't want her asking what his mark is. Then he says it's an arrow and I was like, "Huh? Oh well." *shrugs* Then it turns out he actually is lying and he probably does have a rain drop mark. Poor guy. To have to listen to your soulmate and the girl he actually loves pine for another guy who absolutely has no romantic interest in her...just sad and awkward. Inoue, to be fair, isn't as pine-y and "Kurosaki-kun"-ish as she was in the manga, which is a good thing. Can't wait to see her reaction to finding out Uryuu's real mark.

Uryuu vs. Jidanbo is one of my fave fights. Uryuu looked so smooth and cool fighting the big guy. Glad you included it.
jobananasan chapter 1 . 3/16/2017
The thought of having those marks as symbols for your supposed soulmate is disturbing. Sure it takes the "work" out of love and romance but think of the pressure. What if you're completely incompatible with that person? *smh*

I think Ichigo and Rukia are pretty much in character. I could feel both of their internal struggle to deal with their feelings for and about each other. You also showed Rukia's sense of loneliness and uncertainty.

Ehhhh?! Byakuya has the same mark as Rukia?! Yikes! What about Hisana? What was her mark? No matter how many times I watch or read the scene where Rukia is taken back to Soul Society, I tear up. She's just so damn fucking selfless...Anyways, can't wait to find out why Byakuya and Rukia have the same mark.
ChizomenoHime chapter 2 . 3/13/2017
This is a beautiful start to a hilarious yet sweet and angsty story. So far so good, you are rocking the soulmate trope and I can't wait to hear more about it. Uryu is a great comic relief and yet somehow manages to be the angstiest of them all. Orihime's secret mark was a lovely twist and I can't wait for everyone to become steadily convinced Ichigo and Rukia have matching mark only to learn that no, they have complete opposites, but then again opposites attract and maybe this mark business is more about complementarity than copy pasting a pretty design. Maybe the flower goes with the tiger because such a fragile being can soothe the beast's ferocity and benefit from a strong protector. Raindrops on the other hand are rarely seen alone and gain strength in numbers. The sun has plenty of satellites and makes one of the most astonishing shows when crescent moon fades to dark moon and overlaps during an eclipse. Ok, I'm whipped by this story and hope to read more of it soon!
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