this was so cool *.* good work mate, keep it p :D

PLEASE UPLOAD MOAR! AS SOON AS YOU CAN, I LOVE IT! GREAT WORK, ALL CAPS CUZ I WOULD BE YEELING AT YOU TELLING YOU HOW FREAKING AWESOME THIS IS! (Great work mate, keep it up :D )

Glad to see Ana is getting her just deserts for being an awful mother. I liked how this last chapter mixed it up a bit with a new setting and we can see a greater plot unfolding with this mystery file. You did a great job describing the visceral horror of the attack as well. I am confused who the hell this new guy on the team is, though, haha.

Cool

Boy oh boy, was I pleasantly surprised when I saw that this had a new chapter.

I freaking love this fic, it shows the problems with Ana being alive and coming back that, as you pointed out, people keep ignoring which is really unrealistic.

Fareeha finally broke down (that had to happen at some point) and Angela and Ana keep clashing (I don't really expect that to ever stop, tbh. Too many feelings of betrayal there.)

Anyways, please do keep updating this. It's too freaking awesome and well thought.

This is as lovely and good as the previous chapter, and really, your writing is so good and both Angela and Fareeha are so cute (and in character).

The Caesar joke killed me dead, btw.

Goodness gracious where those 1k odd words good. Really good.

I'd love to see a second part with Fareeha's non-drugged and confused thoughts about both her not-dead Mother and Angela's reaction to the rifle. Oh, and her owm reavtion to her new condition too.

Anyways, awesome little one shot you've got here. I'm really digging Angela's reaction, btw.

Scary