Finally, at the end there, after their third or fourth encounter, he felt guilty!

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Ouch. Bad days on both sides of the coin
R

Edward seems like a hard person to get along with. He seems brash and rude. He didn't even apologize to Bella for spilling the coffee all over her clothes. Caius gave him a chance. He warned him not to play Jazz. Did Edward actually think Caius wouldn't notice and let it go? He got fired the first time for playing jazz and he was warned this second time it could happen again. It's pretty cool that Jasper and Paul are giving him a chance to compose for their movie. I hope it works out for him.

I hope Edward's meeting has a better outcome than Bella's did.
Edward's a proud and determined man.
He & Bella also seem stubborn. I wonder how many hits they can take though?
Thanks.

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Haven't seen the movie but I love ths already. Thanks for writing.

Interesting concept. Bella keeps pitching her scripts but they keep being rejected. Maybe she should take that director's advice. She should write scripts about the life she knows, with embellishments of course.

Looking forward to more

My fav line:
"It's hard to shine bright in this city of stars".

Nice twists
R

sounds interesting, I liked it ;D

I haven't see the movie yet, but I love the classics and Jazz, so I'm in ...