I deeply dislike you changing the year to 2021. It makes zero sense. It would have made more sense for the Death Note to drop into a different human world, making there be many different ones. It also makes no sense at all that Harry would choose to cleanse the world of evil. It would make sense for him to think that after his fourth or fifth year (in canon), but not at six years old. You also clearly have never met a six year old if you think they're that smart. Harry certainly wouldn't have a clue what parole is at that age. It would also make more sense if Harry didn't use the Death Note again until after entering the Wizarding World and finding a cause that motivates him to rethink not using it. He could have spent the next five years learning about his magic, as much as he could on his own with Ryuk.

It's extremely annoying that you randomly have sentences bolded for no reason. I get it when Ryuk is talking, but you do it all the time for others and it's very frustration.

You sped through first year like you were in a huge rush, which I think is a huge mistake. You skipped through his whole childhood too, and gave no details about Dudley whatsoever. I really doubt Petunia would stick around to raise him alone, and that she wouldn't blame Harry for everything bad happening to her. I also dislike how you upped the abuse just to justify Harry killing Vernon, which was really unnecessary.

Muggle devices really do stop working around magic, and the idea that purebloods made that up to stop muggleborns from bringing technology into the magical world is utterly laughable. Wizards and witches lack sense and logic often because they don't need it. Muggleborns are much more sensible, probably smarter in most cases, and obviously would still try to bring muggle things to magical place. They aren't stupid enough to believe a lie like that when it could be so easily disproven. Obviously, you used this excuse just so Harry could bring his phone and keep updated about potential names to write in the Death Note. It's a huge plot failure and weakens your story. I hate that Harry has a cell phone, and hate that you changed the year to 2021. It really ruins the story.

This would be a lot better if Harry wasn't the least bit concerned with the muggle world, and focused only on the wizarding world like he is in canon.

There is NO WAY Harry recognizes Hermione or goes to her father for his teeth. NO WAY. That annoys me so much. Literally thousands of dentists, and what? Harry ends up with the one who is the father of a muggleborn who just so happens to be Hermione? Muggleborns are actually really rare. That part really pissed me off. And seriously? "That kid with the terrible teeth." Her father is a freaking dentist! There are tons of kids with terrible teeth, yet somehow this is how Hermione identifies him. 'Face palm.'

The incident with Malfoy was just awful. I'm not even going to explain why. It's obvious.

I actually didn't bother reding past the Malfoy catastrophe. I did, however, catch the end of the chapter. L. Right. Well if nothing else, that definitely ruined the story. Instead of focusing on a whole new Death Note story featuring Harry Potter with Ryuk, you decided to merge the characters from both stories, creating a total uninteresting mess. The idea of Harry Potter owning the Death Note and how he might use it during the war against Voldemort in a misguided attempt at dishing out justice and saving the world would have been excellent to read. Clearly, however, this is not what you intend. Thus, I'm out..

I will blantantly ignore the fact that at this rime in his life Harry have -zero- motivation OR reason to kill criminals, because -quite frankly- this is sadly the best story on this topic I've found thus far.

While it would have made more sense if he found it in his...hrm...4 year, or better yet; Right after Sirius died in his 5th, (that WOULD have motivated him to use it to clean out the scum) it's still a good story, no matter where it begins.

I'll keep my fingers crossed that logic wins out over the all-too-common need to follow the storyline of the canon -regardless how far-fetched and illogical it is for that to happen. (In most stories, it's a snoballs chance in Hell. Litterally non to require divine intervention, which makes it stupid.)

But you write well at least, and that's always a good sign.

Really? Harry hasn't even STARTED killing, and L is already there? /facepalm

One death is not a pattern. PLEASE tell me you will at least make his deductions LOGICAL, and NOT caused by the author-god-complex. ;

And didn't he die btw? Who took over for him AND took his name? (I forget the name of the one who came after him. I like to pretend the series ended with Light winning. lol)

Oh COME ON. Why do the good stories have to just be
hey guys, I really can't continue anymore. I mean, all stories are just lacking in detail or something, but this was a good story. well

Padma need to die.

Is it just me or did anyone else get confused by the different time jumps and people doing different things around Harry? I mean it would make more sense if it was on screen or in a manga. Written down, though that is a so confusing.

That is sad, the story was good with the right amount of suspense, too bad it will not continue.

What the bloody hell is even happening anymore? This chapter and the last are so hard to follow with you skipping so much of the story. I wanted to like this story, I really did but with the amount of jumping around you do, that’s impossible.

It's a shame but writers come and go. We'll miss you Oscar so put your chin up your still living. I hope find a new job, one that could perhaps be a hobby as well? And don't worry I once was a writer as well my first story got so many crappy reviews in the first few chapters that I deleted and quit.

Gracias por la nota.
Espero sinceramente que encuentres una motivacion para continuar.
La ficcion es muy divertida, pero es mejor vivir la realidad.
Mucha suerte en tus proyectos.
"Cuando yo era niño, hablaba, pensaba y razonaba como un niño. Pero, cuando crecí, dejé atrás las cosas de niño"
Sorry for spanish. i am very bad write english.

Good luck in your future dude, we wish you many happiness.

It's been a nice time. I completely understand not wanting to continue you stories and I appreciate you haven't deleted them like others have, I'll still fav and follow if only because I'm a nostalgic kind of person and if you ever continue your fics I'll be ready :)

I hope you have a absolutely lovely life,
Love,

Lunamoon~

Well, if you want to be depressionist, there is the Heat Death of the universe to worry about, in some 10142 years. But anyways, I'll be one to thank you for NOT deleting your stories like so many others, for the sake of history. I'll also be NOT unfavoriting it, because I use the favorite list as my read history list, for anything I even slightly enjoyed, or atleast didn't completely hate.

So, if you do at some point choose to continue it, I'll still have it favorited. So, if I'm still on the site at that time, I'll keep reading, and I'll look forward to more, if so. As you said and I corrected, the future is (almost) infinite.

I enjoyed it while it lasted, and I'll never tell you what to do or not to do with a story, your the writer. I just reserve the right to stop reading, if I stop enjoying it.

But otherwise, I wish you Luck and Fortune in your future, as (not quite) infinite as it may be...

I do hope you come back someday

When will this story be updated?