Cool concept. Can’t wait for Touma’s School of Punching Magicians.

Right now there are adds in the corner on books about 'monsters'. Oh, the irony.

Interesting story. I hope you continue with the series and I see great potential in this story.

Very interesting. Looking forward to more.

Hahahaha! Rekt!

The execution of the story is pretty decent. There are very few fics with Touma travelling to Fate universe and facing a sarvent. So I will be looking forward for the next chapter.

Huh...that's the first time I have seen him regretting his 'kill' when it is not a proper person in the first place. Certainly, he has not regretted any actions against supernatural forces bent on killing him, if so, he should be miserable when he killed the Angel on Russia where it causes an untold amlunt of destruction.

Grey-Rebl

If you are talking about me then all i have to say is that english isnt my mother language, so expect grammatical errors and whatnot from me... I try to write the best i can but sometimes i forgot things or just plain write them wrong without noticing.

I hope you tone down the self-deprecation.

Kamijou Toma is normal, that's the greatest aspect of him, and it shines through when surrounded by his abnormal companions.

He would only feel relief at having dispatched Berserker, a monster trying to kill him, and most definitely not some misplaced survivors guilt.

Holy crap. Never before had I seen a story with such LONG reviews. Reviews with such terrible grammar, in fact!

If anything, this must mean your story is amazing enough to warrant such...special attention. But I digress.

First off: This story concept has great potential! There are very few stories involvng Toaru and Fate, especially with such quality and creativity. I dont know about you, but there's something about the fight between Berzerker and Kamijou that feels so god damn fresh! The opening scene gave a decent amount of tension, but it must importantly gave it a sense of supernaturality. This hits it home when it is made clear the surreality of a poor dude getting chased by a "living greek statue" as you called it.

When you say it out load, it fits the nature of Kamijou in essence so creaking well.

Heck, by the end of the fight, I expected Berzerker to come back to life for another about, if only so that I can have more juicy action. You didnt sweat the details excessively—it was really well done for its fresh brevity despite being 5k in length. It may be because of the formatting, but who cares? Better formatting than most of what I've seen.

Instead, I'm pleasantly surprised by the fact that, unlike most other crossovers, the one punch wonder is given the justice it deserves! Seriously, you have no idea how much I miss the satisfaction of a problem with a single punch; fanfics are just so fucking overly complex and edgy nowadays. Although, I know that's not the point of Imagine Breaker having consequence—being able to mercilessly kill servants, I still stand by what I say.

But you might want to be careful: Technically, Touma was depressed of killing Berzerker at one moment and then snappy in the next, killing the giant a "pet". The transition of mood flowed well regardless, so the slight lack of realism wasnt all that bad anyways. Just a heads up, though.

Happy writings and keep up the good work!

yes good, good.

well that really a good idea it diverge of all those so called fanfiction that aare litteraly the same where you pick the idea of someone after seing it ( somoene seem to know the fate archive story Einzbern hero and pick some line of my review, i can see that with some slight change or this same so called person get move by it or agree with it well every one is free to express themselve, i don't mind because we are human and his review is what i think and agree with without a doubt .)

the main of to aru majustu.. get transported in tge nasu.

yes, fiction is the way to express on self or image of a serie but even in fiction logic, reason are important in the world of Natsu.

yes pretty idea to make ourself in the place of the main protagonist, with us ( regular and most principaly unknow people) getting to know him better, i thank you for that .

You pretty much show how skilled he is in the begining being able to wistand fist as fast as a bullet and knowing that after some time and description we know only one beeing able to do that ( Heracles know as berseker servant )

and yes it's berseker yep the guy must logically be dead , yet he survived which also is logical considering, how many time kamijou get himself in trouble and how many overpowering being ( god deity),
he fight and defeat through unthinkable and badass way with humoungus will , unbeatable mind and unbreakable mental kamijou touma place himself as a average yet deadly being in the Natsuverse ( yes i know it not well write but i like it better as E.N.D which ironically mean Emiya Natsu Dragneer)

and simply because he is an human not the average one in modern society that live much better than those of Age of god where Demon of all myth exist with all Phatasmal spicies.

and timeline like grece era ( Perseus, heracles, Atlanta ) , ceilte era ( scathach to Diarmuid who are im medieval time )and Nordic (Thor) , civilisation, roman Empire Romulus and remus to Boudica and nero, medieval Arthoria to jean darc and piratery (white beard, black beard , Francis drake ) and list go,until modern era.

kamijou with is luck which is in same level as is kind shirou, CG Emiya aka Acher, Angra mainyu aka avenger, and cu chulain.

all of them getting the same gift which and born to bring hell creating chaos and doom to where, who are in there path, via their E Rank luck that pretty much try to kill them but save the of near death situation so that they could not die even if you they are killed.

he is prety much if not always trying to survived against the natural and supernatural world as if the age of god never end for him and his brother of blood.

He is pretty much human, which mean he is weak and easy to killed.

and yet it is this aspect of humanity that make human the most dangerous and really difficult being to erase of existence of the multiverse.

No even if they are not human as long as they do have what make people pretty much a human being ( Emotion and the will to try and continious even if everithing is a lost cause and their is nothing left ) they are deadly yes no one should call themself non human even if the what they are do not give the description of human, it is who they are that pretty much identified them as human .

human are like a little fire in all the darkness where possibility , time, space, death, live and rebith is stop, where existence is not and will never became nor begin, where void and chaos are the only one , the flame is weak but the fire produce grow stronger each time it is about to die.

Wich bring humanity to evolve adapt , to never surrender even after they die because as long as the flame is weak it grow stronger and deadly to the point to blind Darkness , it pretty much why God the almighty and the many he got created us or create himself in a image of something similar to him.

Near him and always distant to him, a being that have always make the divine spirit and the phantasmal being intigue and yet disgust of their weakness, bit the most of all dangerous yet weak trying to achieve what even gods think impossible yet they always do it, that what may make the gods inconsciously fear humanity.

they want die even id they arw killed.

they are also the source of everything that can be considered as good as evil and wicked because as Avenger state human are the source of all the world Evil and not a so called antity name Evil.

so Author san.

i have many question but for most, did you try to make a prank on us?

because yes you got a good style of story and all but did you do it like that because you felt like it or all of this was already prepare and you got more than ons chapter like 12 other ready bit not yet finish?

Or so do you count on doing like every boring story 3 chapter and sayonara, i let it to crap in hell.

does this story just go canonically and stop in the grail or their would be more like timetravel in the nasuverse good era of typemoon and dimensional travel in thd other grail war universe.

would you includ the chaldea arc in your story in your own twist?
how many character will got involved?

please don't do a crossover between two world it will complicate things and pretth much the more brainless reviewer will just advice and see how you will screw and most of the reader let a story like that when thing get ridiculous, you shoul focus ib kamijou as the main centric.

please really don't get him paire as fast as he see a girl those kind of story don't give "un yotta" ( money) , maybe something like romantic serous logical, just a bit comedy and no real protagonist but a list suggestion that go along the story.

i think that... i will be done here until next... really long review and i do have many question ( Gaia ,Alaya and the list go.

well that really a good idea it diverge of all those so called fanfiction that aare litteraly the same where you pick the idea of someone after seing it ( somoene seem to know the fate archive story Einzbern hero and pick some line of my review, i can see that with some slight change or this same so called person get move by it or agree with it well every one is free to express themselve, i don't mind because we are human and his review is what i think and agree with without a doubt .)

the main of to aru majustu.. get transported in tge nasu.

yes, fiction is the way to express on self or image of a serie but even in fiction logic, reason are important in the world of Natsu.

yes pretty idea to make ourself in the place of the main protagonist, with us ( regular and most principaly unknow people) getting to know him better, i thank you for that .

You pretty much show how skilled he is in the begining being able to wistand fist as fast as a bullet and knowing that after some time and description we know only one beeing able to do that ( Heracles know as berseker servant )

and yes it's berseker yep the guy must logically be dead , yet he survived which also is logical considering, how many time kamijou get himself in trouble and how many overpowering being ( god deity),
he fight and defeat through unthinkable and badass way with humoungus will , unbeatable mind and unbreakable mental kamijou touma place himself as a average yet deadly being in the Natsuverse ( yes i know it not well write but i like it better as E.N.D which ironically mean Emiya Natsu Dragneer)

and simply because he is an human not the average one in modern society that live much better than those of Age of god where Demon of all myth exist with all Phatasmal spicies.

and timeline like grece era ( Perseus, heracles, Atlanta ) , ceilte era ( scathach to Diarmuid who are im medieval time )and Nordic (Thor) , civilisation, roman Empire Romulus and remus to Boudica and nero, medieval Arthoria to jean darc and piratery (white beard, black beard , Francis drake ) and list go,until modern era.

kamijou with is luck which is in same level as is kind shirou, CG Emiya aka Acher, Angra mainyu aka avenger, and cu chulain.

all of them getting the same gift which and born to bring hell creating chaos and doom to where, who are in there path, via their E Rank luck that pretty much try to kill them but save the of near death situation so that they could not die even if you they are killed.

he is prety much if not always trying to survived against the natural and supernatural world as if the age of god never end for him and his brother of blood.

He is pretty much human, which mean he is weak and easy to killed.

and yet it is this aspect of humanity that make human the most dangerous and really difficult being to erase of existence of the multiverse.

No even if they are not human as long as they do have what make people pretty much a human being ( Emotion and the will to try and continious even if everithing is a lost cause and their is nothing left ) they are deadly yes no one should call themself non human even if the what they are do not give the description of human, it is who they are that pretty much identified them as human .

human are like a little fire in all the darkness where possibility , time, space, death, live and rebith is stop, where existence is not and will never became nor begin, where void and chaos are the only one , the flame is weak but the fire produce grow stronger each time it is about to die.

Wich bring humanity to evolve adapt , to never surrender even after they die because as long as the flame is weak it grow stronger and deadly to the point to blind Darkness , it pretty much why God the almighty and the many he got created us or create himself in a image of something similar to him.

Near him and always distant to him, a being that have always make the divine spirit and the phantasmal being intigue and yet disgust of their weakness, bit the most of all dangerous yet weak trying to achieve what even gods think impossible yet they always do it, that what may make the gods inconsciously fear humanity.

they want die even id they arw killed.

they are also the source of everything that can be considered as good as evil and wicked because as Avenger state human are the source of all the world Evil and not a so called antity name Evil.

so Author san.

i have many question but for most, did you try to make a prank on us?

because yes you got a good style of story and all but did you do it like that because you felt like it or all of this was already prepare and you got more than ons chapter like 12 other ready bit not yet finish?

Or so do you count on doing like every boring story 3 chapter and sayonara, i let it to crap in hell.

does this story just go canonically and stop in the grail or their would be more like timetravel in the nasuverse good era of typemoon and dimensional travel in thd other grail war universe.

would you includ the chaldea arc in your story in your own twist?
how many character will got involved?

please don't do a crossover between two world it will complicate things and pretth much the more brainless reviewer will just advice and see how you will screw and most of the reader let a story like that when thing get ridiculous, you shoul focus ib kamijou as the main centric.

please really don't get him paire as fast as he see a girl those kind of story don't give "un yotta" ( money) , maybe something like romantic serous logical, just a bit comedy and no real protagonist but a list suggestion that go along the story.

i think that... i will be done here until next... really long review and i do have many question ( Gaia ,Alaya and the list go.)

Another thing that i forgot to write is that while the magi and any other supernatural being may not feel anything magical from Touma for obvious reasons, they, or at least those who are sensitive enough, should at least feel that there is something really strange with Touma ranging from the strange phenomenon of the mana being dispersed into nothing around him(Gremlin used that info to put that castle after him after him at the beginning of the NT series) that no competent Caster could miss to at least some sort of incomodity by being close to the IB and those servants and magical being with good enough instinct should be very well aware of the threat that the IB represents to then, thing that brings me to the other thing that i forgot to write.

Besides the fact that Berserker should have turn Touma into meat paste because he is at least as physically strong as Kanzaki, if not more(And i think he is, but weaker than Acqua double saint) Berserker pesonal skill 'Eye of the Mind(False) should have give him some hint of danger, if not full blow red alarm, coming from the IB. I mean, that sixth sense clue him to the danger coming from the caladbolg II why cant it do the same with the IB being this something way more dangerous for him than that NP?

shiroryuu01 Nope, they arent the same type of being. The link that the servants have with their masters and with the grail only provides them with Prana, the grail providing most of the prana neede to keep them existing while the masters provide the prana for everything else but that link only provides them with prana not heals them, thats another thing that the master have to do appart if he or she knows how. Whereas innocentius is a flame construct who its constantly being provided with mana and auto-repaired by Stiyl's Runes, thats the only reason because that thing could survive the touch of the IB, because the runes repaired it at much faster pace than the IB was destroying it or just reformed it. The servants doesnt have the same adventage... When Archer was cut by saber in the fate rute he needed some days to heal, also the servants have a magical core inside of them, if said core is destroyed they will disappear.

The other thing with the Imagine Breaker(The Ilusion Killer) being in the Nasuverse, and other of the reasons because Touma can One punch kill servants besides the fact that the thing can affect beings as powerful as an archangel if he touch it, is that its concept(and its name) can easily transform it into a menace for every supernatural thing even bigger than it was in the Toaru verse . The thing with the Naseuverse is that many, many things have their power from beliefs, worship, veneration and the like, Mysteries and fantasies, concepts and feelings. That once in enough quantity or quality can give birth to any sort of things. Heroic Spirits for example comes from Humans or beings close to humans(like demi-gods) that, while they were alive, did many things gaining the admiration/veneration of the people from their time thus when they died they became a Heroic Spirit...thats easy to undestand but the thing with all this is that the one and only requisite to become an Heroic Spirit is that your legend was adored in some point in the history and nothing more, even if the legend its only a fabricated legend, the hero or heroes from that legend can end becoming into Heroic Spirits if enough peoples believe and admire/venerate them. And that without saying the other things that can popup out of that like the Nursery Rhimes...

Some Vampires ancestors are in the rank of being Fantasies given form that cannot be killed unless a fantasy stronger than them came to do the deed.

Noble Phantasm are for the most part Legends given form just as much like their wielders.

And so on...

And the thing with the Imagine Breaker is that its concept is the natural enemy of all those things. The Propuse of the Imagine Breaker is to act as the fail safe, the black box and, the original blueprint of the world (born from the hopes and dreams of the magicians in to aru). A world without lies, without fantasies, without distortions, without ilusions, thus the name 'The Illusion Killer'. Anything above of the normal set value programed in that blueprint will be destroyed/erased/negated, and due the nature of most of the things here and how they works, it causes that they have a bad compatibility against the IB way worse than the general magic back in to aru... And with the Root being the only thing that have something like the blueprints for the world in the Nasuverse you could say that Touma could be conected to the Root

Anyway, to resume, the Imagine Breaker can pretty much exterminate servants and NPs with a simple touch. Because just like his catchphrase says 'Im going to destroy that illusion of yours' he is quite literally destroying embodiments of Illusions, attacking its very existence as legends/illisions in the present time thus the reason because God Hand dont revived Berserker, because even that was negated.

patiphat1998 Nope, Precog doesnt work like that, at least not with that kind of things or else Touma would have fared better against Carissa when she was wielding the Curtana whose amount of raw power can easily surpass the amount of prana of most of servants and that without saying that the telesma is way superior to prana. But like everyone knows had Touma being alone in that battle, Carissa would have crush him like a bug easily, so the same things aplies to berserker here. .