More soon please I love this fic

Please continue this.

Well, now I ship it.

hope you get to update this story soon I cannot stop rereading this

Update soon story is,looking good

Stumbled across this recently and I love it! cant wait to read more! I always like rare pairs and this is one of them that i love! thanks for the awesome story.

Woohoo! Thanks for the update! I like this ship a lot.

And good gracious, poor Jon preemptively pushing away his potential friends. Lighten up a bit, buddy, right?

Anyway, thanks for writing.

Loved it))cannot wait til Jonathan makes progress from denial to smth more XD

Chapter 6 was really interesting and I got to see some of what the villians think about the forming bond. You even put show that Bruce isn't treating selina like a lover and more of a criminal, bruises guarantee that. Loving this and can't wait for more. Keep up the good writing.

From the simple 5 chapters I've read. I have found that story so interesting. The pacing of the story and they react to each other and connect is not to slow and not to long. You gave a believable way on how and why they both interact with each other while not leaving out key details as well. If have to find or have some criticism, it's to the lack of detail for the lost interest of bruce. But as I said this is only 5 chapters and ,if you haven't drop the story, I hope there is more to come. Keep up the good writing and take your time just planning and writing the story.

Aww, I like this, but I notice you haven't updated in a while. I hope you haven't dropped this.

This is nicely written, I love their banter and, while I'm not usually a shipper, I find their interactions really cute and would love to see how this goes.

Googled it already. it's weird and gross.

Damn good story, such a rare pairing which is even more rarely done well. I hope you can continue again soon :)

Yay! I really like this chapter! :D

Milo reminds me of my dog. Such a demanding butthead (but of course, you gotta love 'em, haha)

As always, I love this story, and have a good day/night!

I really liked it! :) That little bipedal joke made me laugh, haha. And sorry for not reviewing much, I hardly ever open this site as compared to others- but this story's got me hooked. Two reviews from me is a good indicator, lmao.

It flowed very well, you don't have to worry about that- I would say though, maybe the story's a little slow-going. I'm not saying it's boring at all. You had her kiss him on the cheek, and then the next three were all about staying at each other's places as favors. At the least, you could have him think about that a little- he's a psychologist (and a god-awful romantic.) I'm similarly terrible at romance and when I think someone likes me I over analyze but never act on any of my assumptions, and I feel like he'd do the same. (Sorry, that was so rambling)

At the most (and you absolutely do not have to, please do not if you don't feel like it) introduce a character, have one of them screw up (always acceptable, characters are not perfect) or put them in a new setting. (Doesn't mean a date, you could have one save the other in a gang-related attack, in Arkham/prison cell, heck, went out to buy groceries for the same house without realizing it, haha. Etc etc)

TL:DR, this story is original, well-written, and I love it, but perhaps you could stir things up a bit with a behavioral mishap, or a new character.

As always, I love reading this story, and please, for the love of god, do not lose sleep at night because of my (or others) feedback. Don't feel pressured. Take it at your own pace.

Have a good day/night! :)

Hahaha, that was fun! Can't wait for the relationship to progress;)