I love your book so far! When you have time, can you please update? I'm so excited, I can't wait to read what happens next!

The lawsuits are going to be problematic, for the recipients. Please update as soon as possible.

Smart thinking, on Hitsugaya Taicho’s part.

Sooo is this story going to have boys love?

I kind of wish someone would write a fanfic where all of the Shinigami are human and go to a magic school in Japan. I had a thought that Toshiro would be the main character or whatever. Well, anyway, he would start school much earlier due to how much magical power he has. Let's say that it's common for some kids to start much earlier, but they don't leave school until they're eighteen/seventeen like in Hogwarts. The purpose of them attending early is to get their magic under control so the power doesn't unconsciously ooze out. Like in the anime, Toshiro made it so cold while he was asleep that a white mist formed. Zanpakuto's would still exist, coming in all blade forms but most commonly as a katana. They would basically be the soul of another being that represents the wizard/witch(kind of like an Animagus, or Daemons) and would be able to take two or three forms. For those who have an animal or Beast based, like Toshiro, they would be able to take three forms; their original form which for Hyourinmaru would be his dragon form, a human or humanoid form like in the anime, and their zanpakuto form. I imagine that his grandmother would take him to a healer(I also see her as being his real Grandma and him being a pure blood). Oh and if a student has no zanpakuto, they'll be like Ichigo's friends with their own abilities. Uryu, Chad, and Orihime for example. Or like the Arrancars(they can be good or bad)

Anyway, I imagined eleven year old Toshiro taking part in an exchange program in which Hogwarts takes one student from Mahoutokoro (which is Toshiro) and along with his Mahoutokoro studies(which he can do over half the summer) he studies at Hogwarts to learn their magic as well.

Can't wait to read more.

Please update soon it will be interesting to see how the wizarding world reacts when they realise who toshiro is. Loving it so far lookinging forward to the next chapter!

Very interesting, the will sounds amazing and I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Oh boy. Things are going to god quite sour for many people. Hope we see the gates of hell again soon

Can't wait to see the next update

I cannot wait to see this updated

OK i just read over my review and decided that i should start with saying that i am not trying to be aggressive here but i have seen so many stories go to die this way and it annoys the hell out of me so don't take anything i say personally, i'm just mad

i made it down to the point of him overhearing the stealing everything he owns and leaving him to rot in prison bit and am just so angry now! (not even going to touch why they are talking about this in a public area)

I had such high hope for this story! i hate it when people make the good guys cartoonishly evil for no good reason and i refuse to read anymore now that i know that you plan to waste a perfectly good story idea in the gutter like this

Really i hope to god that you respond to this review because i want to know why you did this!

if you wanted ron and his family out of the story you could have just used the fact that ron would bug the hell out of Toshiro to have them not become friends on the train and you could even make dumbledore a minor villain without making him evil by having him do the mind reading thing on toshiro (and i don't care what anyone says THAT'S cannon) only to get blocked so toshiro will think dumbledore is trying to control him or something (just having died to Aizen's betrayal would have shot up his paranoia levels) and dumbledore could think that the horcrux has taken harry over or something this way they can be enemy's while staying in character

hell you could just have him leave the wizard-ing world completely, he is a soul reaper captain! voldy is an ant to him why the hell should he care about him when he could do far more good going around killing hollows, that could have made an interesting story of them trying to get him to come to hogwarts, there was so many options and yet you chose the same annoying over used one that so many others have driven into the ground

so PLEASE PLEASE! answer this review and tell me why you did this!

P.S. other than plot i saw no problems with the story the writing seems to be good.

What exactly does he look like in this story? Does he look like Toshiro or Harry?
Other than that, its a great start.