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  Guest chapter 11 . 6/23/2019 Please update |
 manbir chapter 11 . 7/26/2018 please update |
| manbir chapter 11 . 7/26/2018 soo awsome please update next part prity please |
| laurajustin chapter 11 . 6/12/2018 Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| SuperHarmony chapter 1 . 4/26/2018 Poor Kise-kun… Poor Katsamatsu-san… Oh Dagyon Yuuki-san, you can read or watch “FreeIwatobi Swim Club”. There's no yaoi in it! |
| SuperHarmony chapter 1 . 4/18/2018 Poor Kise-kun… Poor Katsamatsu-san… Oh Dagyon Yuuki-san, you can read or watch “FreeIwatobi Swim Club”. There's no yaoi in it! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/12/2018 please upload asoon this story is really good |
| takethisandgo chapter 1 . 2/3/2018 this is a really great story, but i noticed a few words that i think you use it wrong.. (i'm not a native in english myself but i think you mean another words than the one you use in the story) like 'intimation' for example, i think you mean to use 'intimidation' ? or 'throne' not 'thrown', and 'except' not 'expect' because those pair of words have totally different meanings. but this is a great story nonetheless. i hope you continue this story and i dont want to offend you because i myself cant write at all |
| Dhea30 chapter 11 . 8/30/2017 um... as you had explained how Nijimura and Kuroko became 'brothers', I think you should explain how exactly is Kuroko and Nijimura's relationship with Akashi besides the former-and-successor-captains or one-of-light-and-shadow that they have. Because seriously, that kind of relationship certainly won't end up with Akashi being 'intimate' with them like that. Also, does Akashi has so much freetime that he can come to preliminaries in the tokyo region? His school is in KYOTO and he is the CAPTAIN in Rakuzan for god's sakes! No matter how wealthy Akashi is, he is still a highschool student, so it is illogical to see him there. Unless maybe he was called by his father to work, and then finished the work early... alright, I'm rambling. Now there is only one thing left that I have to say. I actually love this story's plot. Truly. There's just so few Nijimura-confronting-MiraGen stories out there afterall. But really, there are only 2 chapters (maybe 3?) where I can actually read the chapter without my brain stops to search for the correct words and taking notes, and in all honestly it's has become kind of irritating. As I had said, I truly love this story, so if you have trouble in beta-ing, I honestly don't mind to do it. I will even beta-read your already posted chapters if you want me to. It is just an offer though, it's up to you cause even if you don't want to, it doesn't meant I will stop reading this story when you update next. |
| Dhea30 chapter 7 . 8/30/2017 some mispells... sometimes my brain truly stops for a moment to search for the right words in every chapter. I want to comment every word mistakes actually, maybe later I will go back and do just that. The one mistake I truly take note in this chapter though is in the last sentence. The right word is not "thrown", but "throne". Both words have completely different meaning. |
| Dick-grayson-trash chapter 1 . 8/11/2017 *sees over protective big brotherIMMA SLUT FOR DIS SHIT |
| Kurosaki Yukia chapter 11 . 7/9/2017 AAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA I ABSOLUTELY LOVEEE THIS STORYYYYY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN |
| The golden fairy chapter 1 . 6/13/2017 update it soon |
| sexy Seren chapter 11 . 5/23/2017 Update it soon |
| sexy Seren chapter 7 . 5/23/2017 Love it |
