Wow great story

The intensity in this story had me breathless and the feels were perfect! I would read this again.

So intense, amazing writing! Would love a next chapter of the aftermath

Wow, breathtaking. Very intense, great writing. Don't think this needs anything else.

so intense! the feels! so much details i can barely breathe.
this is good! even the drugs supposed to get him killed but at some point it's related to how jay seen himself right..? so you need to dig in more to it i guess..why he feels so less than others...soon updates ihope..

WOW! I'm simply blown away! This is so heartbreaking, and so good! I'm all for more chapters to this!

Wow! Just wow. Such an intense well constructed story.

love this so much

Awesome I love the intensity of the story

This is part of the reason I am happy to call you my family. i love you

I really liked it. I would love to see a second part.. maybe his recovery? Or even the backstory and a recovery? :)

Amazing! Please write a second part

Welcome back Jay. It's nice to read sth new by you. Second part would be awesome :)

I love your stuff! More Jay whump please! :-)

Please continue this story! It was incredible! And a chapter with Jay and Erin interacting afterwards. Actually, can you do at least a section from Antonio, Voight and Alvin's perspective as well with Jay and then maybee watching Jay and Erin afterwards. Sorry, too many requests! I am just blown away by the emotional depth of your writing - I loved it! This story has so much potential!