Read the end since I noticed how much you leaned on glorifying the dark side. Horrible! This should be under ''angst'' not romance. He killed Rey-so much for his love. Not that Rey was any better in your story-she just overlooked and shrugged when kylo slaughtered people she knew. It shows you haven't understood the characters at all.

In all your stories you always write Hux so well! Would you ever consider writing a fanfic with him and Rey? I feel like you’ve made me fall in love with the character but there is no content out there with him and Rey...

“I'll fry for you, babe.“ That’s where you lost me. There have been other instances where colloquialisms were out of place but this was so jarring. It pulled me out of the story so hard that all curiosity about the conclusion of the story left me.

Really enjoyed it, keep up the hard work.

I loved this story. Twas abrupt, but I were th a re's another tale. Thanks for posting! I'll continue forward.

Wow... okay now you lost the plot here. Had a great thing going on. The whole Jakku storyline was awesome and then you just went off the deep end.

First few paragraphs were cringeworthy but it picked up afterwards. I was a bit disappointed that you referred to things so generically. Beer, crisps, marshmellows and so on when there is a whole compendium of star wars snacks out there you could've used. Felt a little lazy.

Wow... that was... AWESOME!

Great writing, great content and great chapter. I love the whole Jakku and neutral Rey thing especially as it is sold so well.

Be proud of this chapter for it is great. What am I doing? On to the next one!

Again shaky but good.

A bit shaky I found in certain places with the characters but it's got heart and good writing.

I do agree that Rey didn't have an opinion on First Order or Resistance until they tried to kill her. That drew the line in the sand. So it makes sense that a different first impression would leave a different mark.

Well done.

Okay? Don't know where it's headed so I can't give proper opinion other than the writing seems decent so... well done.

Wow. I never thought I would read a story where Snoke's/Plageus's death would nearly make me cry. I love the way you portrayed him as a fatherly figure.

Rey is really annoying and unlikeable in this story. Her while I want to go back to Jakku is just annoying and doesn’t make any sense to me. If you would take someone from poverty and gave them better opportunities in life they would be grateful.
So yeah her whole „I want to go back to Jakku“ is straight up annoying.
I feel for keylo in this story

Wouw! I really enjoy this. I love this long story! Congrats.

I think that in this story, the protagonists go through all situations. It is very complete although it does not end well, let's say, haha.
I have read almost all your work and I wonder how you write. I enjoy very much. Keep going. We are fervent followers of your work. Thank you!

This one really made me feel for Kylo. He really honestly tried. In his own way of course. But he was less sithy in this story and still he loses Rey. While I'm glad Rey didn't give in this time, but I still wanted her too. I will always want a happy ending for my Reylos. But I'm also happy you don't give into the pressure from the reviews. Thanks for another great story. Now onward to part 2