More! Please!

Magua does have a twisted soul. What's going to happen now with all these angry characters. If they knew Maguas thoughts they'd be very upset with Uncas. Mistake or redemption we will see.

I can so relate to the conflict in this chapter. Families can be so difficult to handle.

Right now I'm thinking ogbtharvStein quote: a bird may love a fish but where would they live. Something like that.

Bah. Magua escaped.

I loved that beginning. Just a simple mention of Maguas name in those terrifying moments was a great way to allow time for the rescuers.

I absolutely love your take on the events that took place during and after the cliff battle. I also like how you have different POVs throughout the story. I hope you will be updating soon, cause I am absolutely enthralled with this story. Your writing is masterful and on point and I wish all the luck in the world to see this story through until the end. Cause I really, really, really, want to see how this story comes together.

i enjoyed this! can't wait for more alice/uncas. i hope you find time to write soon. thanks for the story thus far!

Any chance of an update? I keep watching and hoping for one.

This story is so good! I love it! It's so different. Now that Magua is waking up I wonder what's going to happen now?

I really loved this. So good to read the various characters perspectives. Looking forward to more.

For some reason, I didn't receive an email notification for chapter 10. So I am very glad I noticed that you'd posted an update, or else I would have missed this wonderful chapter showcasing Magua's POV. Like one of your other reviewers, it made me laugh to read crotchety Magua describing his caregivers. I like the way he referred to Cora and Uncas as "these damned kids"! I also liked his thoughts about the Sachem giving him Alice to take for wife. It doesn't sound like Uncas has to worry about Magua claiming her as his own when he's back on his feet. I often wondered what Magua would have done with Alice if he'd made it back to his village with her. A few fanfics portrayed him as torturing her, but I don't think so. I think you're right that he would have given her to some willing Huron warrior to marry. You really did a good job with this chapter, as you are with the entire story. I look forward to see what you have in store for us next!

Oh, by the way, I also loved chapter 9 as well. You always manage to make me laugh with something humorous. This time it was Nathaniel nearly choking on his ale when Chingachgook dropped the bomb that he knew about Magua! I can just picture Nathaniel snorting ale out of his nose! Lol! Great job!

Interesting to get Magua's POV. You even got me to smile a bit, which I never expected to do where Magua is concerned!

How will Uncas explain this one? Chingachgook, as always, knows and understands his son.

I liked the entire story so much! Thank you for writing. I am waiting for more!