So sad that theres no more to this story would love to have one more chapter to end on a happy note

Awww i love it xx

I love it but I would like to know what happens between jac,johnny and jasmine please

Awww so happy that your keeping the story going loved this chapter

I love this fanfic another excellent chapter. Please keep going xc

desperately waiting on an update

just found your stories and you write jac’s thoughts so incredibly well! I’d love to see your take on the current storyline as it’s such an important one for jac!

Awww i love where this story is going. Keep going xx

Jac and Emma scenes were cute. I'm glad Jac is going to try to make more of an effort with Jasmine.

Awww that was so cute yet again wonderful chapter xxx

Awwww soo glad you updated another great chapter keep going xx

Glad to see Jonny in this story, I miss him and Jac on the show. Emma and Jasmine scenes were cute, it's a shame Jasmine didn't get to meet her. Liked that Zosia was mentioned. Good luck with uni and looking forward to more when you get the chance

I'm really enjoying this. I can't wait to see how the story pans out!

I love this!

It's a good chapter but the way you write Emma's dialouge is completely wrong and a little nauseating. It put off reading the chapter properly - i ended up skimming. Young children don't say "me do this." They are capable of using the word "I" and do so 99% of the time. My cousin is only two and i've never heard her refer to herself as "me" instead of "i" when describing herself. If you've never been round children long enough to accurately write them, you need to research their speech patterns first. Be realistic!