I TOTALLY LOVED YOUR STORY.

Suzaku-kun has a geass now? This is gonna be interesting.

There's quite a few structure errors throughout, and near the end you seem to forget that Lelouch already called Suzaku a fool and warned him what would happen if he left. I like the idea here, but I think you need to improve your writing as a whole or let it mature and then trh re-writing the fic.

It was a nice fic. I love kalulu but you sort of forget about them in the last chapters :-(

I think you should go with option two there aren't a lot of stories like that and it could be interesting

Allswell that ends well. This story has its weak points. I even considered dropping it once or twice... but through it all, it's a nice relaxing read.

review... thus far the fic is painful to read. It's not bad per-se... but, the thoughts come off heavily manufactured. Perhaps it's just less engaging to me to have too many layers visible, perhaps its just my own mind dampening my enjoyment thus far.

I wanna say option two with just Kallen traveling back in time
Bit then she would have to start her relationship with Lelouch from scratch and personally I want them to start back where they left off
And since you did not put a "lelouch and Kallen" option

I am going to go with option 7
Lelouch and Kallen and Suzaku

One last thing... will there be lemons?

kallen, but I would make it to where she gets in a relationship with him before the rebellion. Then he can take her with him to the chess matches. what's cooler then having your queen witness your conquests. Because if a King doesn't have a queen by his side, how can he expect to be happy after he has finished all his conquests.

I vote for option 2 (I also voted for it on the poll).

Great ending to the story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was definitely not expecting Cornelia to be the third geass user either. I feel the epilogue was a bit short but all in all it was a great story, thanks.

great story bro, i read from beginning to end. what are your future plans?

This is completely illegible.

I enjoyed the earlier parts but the latest sections weren't to my taste (I just read the whole story to date) my guess is nunnaly or euphimia with geass

O.O well then is it Mao?