Updaateeeee pleeaaseee:(

Please update this fic. Need more of this

hmmmmm yes yes great

hmmmmm nice damn nice

hmmmmm nice

Just typing it here:
I’ve seen the first two chapters of this amazing story. I’ve waited two years in despair, knowing that the update might never come. Yet, here it is, unexpected but oh so welcome. I understand that the reviews are scarce for now, but do remind yourself from time to time that there is at least one Dedicated Soul ready to wait years for an update.

I feel for poor Winter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good stuff

Look loong forwards to that talk with Penny. The perception and ignorance of androids leading Ephraim to treat them no different than masked soldiers and not like simple machines may induce some culture contemplation. I do hope for some powder keggery in the future too. Electricity by the tonitrus is still a new and unexplored invention for him so it would be a great opportunity to learn of the properties of electromagnetism.

Thanks for the chapter. I look forwards to more.

Good job so far.

Three chapters in and there's no outstanding annoyance present here that I'd associate with bad works. So I'm looking forward to this one with great interest.

I thought you wanted to create a story with Maria as the center, then in this chapter I hoped for Ludwig's appearance, but it seems to be an OC Hunter instead, oh well. Writing is good enough to continue reading regardless.

Its nice to see a story that isnt just a copy of cannon and somwhat original

Ah, so pure... The erratic response of a Hunter of the Dream used for comedy... I clap to you, I sit and clap to you, Special FX... Well done, is all is all I shall say...

Not a particularly interesting or eventful chapter, but glad to see an update.