OMG yes please don't be abandoned

Cute and hot

Ei! I'm excited with this fic

I look forward to seeing how their relationship will deepen and how the situation with Itachi gets solved

Hey! Hallelujah for creating this story! I love it so much! I'm loving them so bad! I love how you write them! And this world is so interesting!

i love this fic so much

I'm loven the story so far what next

Excited for next chapter!

Well, there are quite a few grammar errors then there probably should be(repeated phrases and the such) throughout both chapters. BUT, amazingly it did not detour me from enjoying so far. I have to let you know, mistake or not, I look forward to future chapters. I am TOTALLY CAPTIVATED! This fic has more and then some of what I love to read about in fics. Yaoi, sex, drama in the family, secret lives, escaping death, fantasy/supernatural, sex(yeah, I know I stated it twice*sheepish grin*, MPREG(HELLS YEAH!)! What could a girl ask for!? MORE! Saske and Naruto got me thinking like that 'Verual Villagers' PC game, just starting from scratch. Living off the land, hunting(I hope Sasuke at least knows how to do this), fishing, foresting, and farming. They do have to keep out of sight, right? Thank you for giving it to me. Keep up the good work. You can only get better. XP

Cool! How old is Sasuke and Naruto? I guessing Naruto is about 12 since he hasn't had his first heat. They mate young. I can see those two settling on the side of a mountain with a river and forest near by with plenty of forest life and fish to catch for years to come.*dreamy face* XP Will Kakashi ever brake free of the control Itachi has on him? Will anyone else for that matter? Will they seek out Sasuke for help when/if Itachi seems corrupted?

Nice update

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good luck for next chapter

I love your stories. Always presenting interesting concepts. Please continue what you are doing. Its great.

Im glad this story get to continue! The premis was so interesting and I want to know what will happen. Sasuke was fast to fall for Naruto, I completly understand him. They both got lucky and I can't wait to see more fromt this story! Good luck with school.

So excited you updated. I love that you focused more on character development. Can't wait for more.