You really-really need to find a beta. This is very hard to read with all the grammatical problems. Maybe English isn't your native language, but your pov and tenses are ALL over the place. I hope you get some help and rewrite this ... I'm sure it'll be a good read if you do. ~jsm

Keep writing. It is getting good.

Well that was great so I wonder who it is that Sasuke likes if not Sakura which I'm glad about and now Sakura knows how Naruto feels for her can't wait for more

Well that was interesting it was cute but Sakura still seems to be infatuated with that loser Sasgay so whatever wonder what happens next

This is great , but I think you should write another chapter which will be only about NaruSaku after their return.

Thanks for good story but:

1: Hope its not
2: False this story and writing were nice/good
3: Wrong like I said story was good
4: Don't care :v
5: Can't say anything about it cuz im not too but this is were revievers comes and they point your downs... :V (beta readers too)
6: Maybe but this story was good romance soo can't agree :V

Hope it's not last story of yours because it was enjoyable journey :P
HF with writing Hope to see something new in future!

See ya!

nteresting chapter

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Honestly, only thing that screw logic is Kishimoto in that "The Last" bullshit.

Hello
Idea for story is good as for story itself its writed nice but
chapters are really short it could be much better and it's really sad that only 6 chapter has come after 2 and half year :/ really this story have so much
POTENTIAL but cuz its so short and there is long waiting for every next chapter I don't know if its worth but Keep writing and have fun with it!

It's getting interesting now. Update soon. Can't wait to read more.

Well that was interesting if not slightly weird

Well this was interesting I guess Naruto's not one for words and I wanted to read Shikamaru's letter's

MOAR!

Please complete the story I'm looking forward to it