consider yourself encouraged! i really hope you finish this one, it's a good idea and a good start!

I absolutely love this story. You have a fantastic writing style.

Thanks, love watching the characters of Merlin and Arthur emerge. Each chapter lets us know a little bit more.

Merlin's star-struck and tongue-tied. There's definitely more happening there. I'm intrigued by the subplot in this chapter. I love a good murder mystery puzzle.

Nice beginning!

Interesting first meeting between writer and detectives. I get the feeling Arthur may be hanging around a bit.
Thanks, enjoyed the chapter.

What a fantastic premise. Very creative. I love the plots for Arthur's novels. All the characters are spot on. It's great how you amalgamated the actors' names with canon names.
I'm totally hooked on this story already. I can't wait until the next chapter.

What a fantastic premise. Very creative. I love the plots for Arthur's novels. All the characters are spot on. It's great how you amalgamated the actors' names with canon names. I'm totally hooked on this story already. I can't wait until the next chapter.

That was amazing plz continue I really enjoyed it