| Reviews for The Fox and the Seedrian |
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American Samurai 2018 chapter 14 . 1/30/2018 I've very much liked this story. I absolutely loved how you brought a true ending to the Sonic X anime. However, as constructive criticism though the story was long since completed and I only recently found this story and began reading it last night, I noticed that you have made a slight mistake of the time dilation viewpoints. For every month that past in Sonic's world, in Mobius, it would be a year in Chris Thorndyke's dimension. I did some basic math from the ARK meeting, and the time was just slightly off. In the 2 weeks that Helen and Chris had been gone up to the meeting happening, it was approximately 28 hours, not 56. Because if our world was Chris's, I had realized when I saw the show that time ran faster by a factor of some number my self in Chris's world relative to Sonic's. Just thought I'd point that out. So apparent by the end of the last scene of Chris and Helen going to the chilidog barbecue a Tails and Cosmo's home, the 10 months they had been there up to the point of Sonic making his toast would be 10 years in back in Chris and Helen's dimension. |
themaritimegirl chapter 1 . 12/13/2017 Your writing is magnificent. I'd love to see more Tailsmo or Sontails stuff from you, smut or otherwise. :) |
Linz2 chapter 1 . 9/21/2017 Genius ending for a genius story! |
Fiera the Proud chapter 14 . 4/3/2017 Oh man I'm... I'm actually crying right now. This was a beautiful story. Thank you so much for writing this. |
La cosmix chapter 14 . 3/25/2017 I have enjoyed this! Great job, I look forward to whatever else you have in store! :D |
La cosmix chapter 10 . 3/21/2017 Drama! I like. Great job once again. This story deserves much more to be honest! |
La cosmix chapter 7 . 3/16/2017 ooooooooh. |
Sir Punchalot chapter 5 . 3/14/2017 Damn, Tails sure works fast xD I like the story very much. In my opinion there's no such thing as too much Taismo. |
La cosmix chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 Interesting. I'm gonna stick around for a bit. |