THIS IS TOO CUTE. I love mizuiro as narrator

its a wonderful take on another perspective. love it..

Just finished “Hello Halcyon Days”—which I couldn’t put down!—and I love Mizuiro’s POV here! Your Shipper!Mizuiro and Pining!Ichigo are perfect. Thanks for writing this!

love it!

Great job. I love the story!

Just finished reading the newest chapter of Halcyon Days (did I write that the right way) and this one. I think I'd read just about anything from you. I really enjoy your writing style and how you formulate your thoughts and the string of your storypoints. It's rally really enjoyable to read. Thank you very very much!

THIS

That was an interesting point of view.
Thank you :)

God, that was so cute that I had to look away for a moment to regain my bearings (and stop squealing in joy)! In other words, amazing job! :)

I like this way...I would loved to read more of ur works

Heartfelt sigh. So beautiful xx : )

Why are all your stories awesomely good?!
Seriously, I enjoyed this oneshot.
I think it would be awesome if you wrote a story for each of the people closest to Ichigo and Orihime just to show their perspective on the duos' relationship (though I know that's asking for too much lol).

Loved it ~~ Love the way you make it... make more one shot from another perspective please like tatsuki or karin and yuzu or chad can also

Yo también siempre pensé que mizuiro era de poco hablar pero mucho ver.
además hasta ellos notaron el cambio de animo de ichigo cuando orihime es secuestrada.

Loved it. He's always been quite perceptive. I wanted to ask if you're writing a one shot from the view of every person close to ichigo? If you are then a tatsuki one shot can also be a option.
Keep writing!