This was a really good story such an interesting take on things. I'm so glad I found it.

To Kerry siddall I’m pretty sure this is from Sesshomaru’s POV before he met her back in the future

I stopped reading at chapter 4 when she still married an abusive a-hole. Awful story.

wow, someone really loves bashing.

I loved it! Perfectly written if you ask me

This was a very interesting piece though a few chapters left me in tears. I'm pretty sure I cried all the way through chapter five. I was rather shocked abiut what happened to Kagome if she stayed with Inuyasha. However I wasn't truly surprised that it ended up and abusive relationship. He always was quick to anger and prone to violence in the series. The fact he continued to see Kagome as Kikyo was definitely a shock as well. Then to top off the whole thing Sango and Miroku still trying to push her towards Inuyasha. At least Miroku came to his senses. I'm glad Kagome and Sesshoumaru got their happy ending when all was said and done.

Fantastic Story! I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you! .

Your story was wonderful, I cry on some of the chapters m.

all the recap is it really needed?

seriously not marry him so quickly?! so shes just dumb

hermoso.

Is his all in sesshomaru's head when he wakes up to reality or will they break off into an alternate reality where in one she died and sesshomaru dreamed it up of changing the past; and the alternate were she lived to change the future.

Great story

Its been an amazing story; but, I would like to proofread and edit your sentence structure for you.. If you dont mind?

great story! and you have great sentence structure, but u left a run on with a cpuple repeats.

He stored the Tessaiga next to the Tenseiga and carefully coated his hand with his own poison acid to clean the half-breed's blood from his hand before he held his hand out over his body and watched the acid fall in streams onto his body.

maybe just fix the end to before he held his hand over the body and watched the acid fall in streams over it.