No. I was so hoping you weren't gonna use Mawhile. I really hate mawhile in general. Oh well. Story is still good. So thats all that matters to me.

I know you haven't updated in forever but please continue this story! I love it so far! Please?! It's so good! There isn't much like this one. Let alone in such good quality. Please continue. Please!

I am loving this! Please update even if you haven't done it in a while! Some of us are dying to read more. It's such a unique and great story!

Wow, this is such a great story! Not like any fanfic I've read before, it is obvious that you planned this well and with whole passion. I especially like the concept of what if Alain and Marin went with ash all over the kalos region instead of bonnie, Serena and clemont. I hope you continue it despite it being years since you updated. Hope you are okay. This fanfic really has made me realize i Marin and Alain to travel with ash instead of the 3 (but I still love the three but I think this would be more interesting along with the sensors thing thats going and the fact alain is working for the Lysander.) being a sensors, pikachu swearing all the time and ash having to take away pikachu's ketchup privilege if pikachu sweared infront of Leia or did something -funny- wrong . I also love that you picked a mawile as ash's mega instead of a lucario don't get me wrong I love lucario but I always wanted ash to get a mawile I don't know why.

Of course ash wants to obtain mega evolution he has like 5 pokemon that have mega evolution capipability

When is the author gonna continue this fanfiction? It's good but why not continue it? I wanna see or read Ash's reaction to Rayquaza here.

This is such an enjoyable experience reading this
i love pikachu swearing and alain sarcastic remarks
ash kindness and unique ability and mairin is just adorable
thank you for this wonderful story
P.S. i hope you're okay and having a wonderful day

Very interesting story. I truly hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story. I truly love pikachu's personality in this story.

Where’s the continuation? I know you said you have writers block, but this story is planned. Maybe you should get someone to help with your stories. I’m only saying this because your stories are great and I want to see them finish. Also, at Coumarine, explain how Serena didn’t see the kanji.

I hope you update this story really soon! _

There are two types of fan fiction stories, amazing ones that barely ever get updated and bad ones that never get updated because even the author knows how bad they are. You are in the first category. Do everyone reading a favor and update!

Ooohhhhhh mannnn please continue,I'm finding this so awesome and entertaining please continue

Ahhh~ Beautiful! Magnificent!

I only found this story today, but binge reading it was totally worth it.

One question though, I saw that your last update was June last year, and I was wondering, is everything alright?

I know we don't know each other in the slightest, however, I still worry for people. Just part of who I am.

*snickers* We all know the only thing holding Ash and Pikachu back from being Even More Terrifying is the part where Mega-Evolution only works on a Pokémon's final evolution form, which nothing can convince Pikachu to put up with ever. (Not even Ash's life- they've literally never found a situation where evolving would actually help, considering how utterly Badass Pikachu has becomes over the years.)
It's also a forgone conclusion that there are quite a few of Ash's collective that probably i/could/i Mega-Evolve, if they found the right Megastones. Charizard, for certain, which is extra fun with Alain tagging along. Meganium, that Chikorita who literally had a huge crush on Ash? She could probably do it if they resolved that untenable crush problem satisfyingly. Infernape, Butterfree… Most of te ones that come to mind the strongest either never evolved like Pikachu, or I don't remember them finishing the evolution chain, so...
Still. If Mega worked on not-fully-evolved Pokémon? Dump Ash and his entire Collective in a repository and head for the fallout shelters. But don't forget to set up All The Cameras, transmitting to a computer in the shelter (for when they break, so the data is saved). You'll never see so many Mega's in one place again, unless someone let's Ash keep them all and convinces him to do a Show for the League between battles. XD

Meh, just a comment about Ash's statement that not all pokemon are good. Thanks to the fact that he's the "chosen one" and a legendary trouble magnet he really has seen a lot more crap than pretty much any trainer. Been on the receiving end of town-leveling attacks (like the whole Alamos Town fiasco involving an angry Dialga and Palkia, or the Arceus problem where Arceus held a grudge against humanity in general), and seen legit pokemon death more than once (Latios and Lucario). Either way, he's definitely seen the good in the word but no one can doubt the fact he's also seen the (probable) worst the world's got to offer as well. I just find that he'd be one of the most credible people to say the statement he did.