YAAAAAAAAAAAA now the waiting game -

Ashur*

has Asher been a cannon character the whole time?!

keep up the good work

nice to see you alive and well man! nicely done here, can't wait for the next! and I'll be sure to take a look at the previous chapters when I get a , ODSK

I honestly thought it would go into a Destiny 2 kinda thing where the tower gets destroyed (I cant reply exactly because I'm using mobile app)

I honestly got scared reading the part in Theriads dreams and I thought the story was going in a completely different direction...Good job

"Way way shorter?" I don't know about you but this was a nice surprise from my otherwise boring day.

*Stares intensely at the screen; deciding just how, and what to comment.* umm... yeah I got nothing for this Authors note. I hope the other 18 people who have favorited, and 28 followers, can help you out more than me. In total, I like the chapter, going to be interesting how they go up against the Splicers. Btw, thanks for the comment. It didn't email so I didn't see it until a few days ago. As always, enjoying the story, whichever route you take is up to you, just make sure you see it through. Au revoir!

Lololol, Iksis with all his weapons. Personally, I think its a but much, especially for a single vandal, but whatever. don't know where he hid all those Shock swords.

no worries, better to get life stuff out of the way. Seeing as how The Outcasts aren't going to go to the Tower, it will be interesting to see their next move.

Ahhh... now we see the conflicts, I see. I might not be one to use things out of timeline, but If it works it works; and there's nothing that can be said about any plan if it turns out great in the end. As for a friend... well... that's touchingI'll be here when it returns. Its always good to reserve time for yourself, so don't sweat being a little inactive. As always, looking forward to what the future has instore for our three unorthodox heros. *Menacing laughter commences*

A couple single letter errors, but otherwise another compeling chapter. Don't worry so much as to when you feel like you have to release the chapters. Once a week would be optimal, gives you time to edit and read things over just to be sure. Otherwise, looking forward to the next step in their journey. Au Revoir

Great start so far. Interested to see how this story plays out

Interesting. *sits with sinister intent in his spinning office chair*. Very interesting...